Instead of giving you a review, I'll write you a few sentences of what this book is like.There was once a barn with horses and pigs. One day, a pig and a horse crossed each other. They looked at each other but did not speak, as pigs cannot speak to begin with. Actually, horses cannot speak for either. In this world, no pigs or horses were able to talk. Although both animals had their grievances, they passed each other, not being able to convey their thoughts as they were unable to communicate. You're welcome.
Simply, I like it.This one gets to the standards of pro American novels, edited and with good author who can drive the story with exciting adventures. Mixing Qi and Elves (I know they are not but...) inside Game like world is interesting concept I didn't find elsewhere. MC is likable black guy with good experience before getting to another world and doesn't dwell on "it's a game" mindset. I would like more engagement from side characters (elves) but that is really me being picky. There are only two cons, occasional typos (very, very few) and that is doesn't have 700+ chaps already.I come here after Phoenix Phire, which is of similar concept and I would recommend to everyone here hungry something like this.
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First off, I really like the character of the MC. That's my ideal MC. Second, the writing style is a bit unique, as it's placed in well written dialogues that are understandable, and because of the set up of the paragraphs that makes it fairly easy to read. Even the extra unnecessary details are well done. I don't really see any faults within. The novel tells a good story too, although a bit cliche of course, but it's good! 8/10 would recommend!!
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your story seems nice and interesting, more like a mega movie. I enjoy reading the synopsis and it seen attractive.
I really like the story. Even if we're all busy authors, I like magic and going to kepp my eyes on the updates.About the story. I like the plot and idea, I like how it goes, however I feel the main hero is a little bit too quick chosen by the teachers. Though it's not bad at all if it's well-explained.Keep going!
The complaints of several of the readers stem from having to read a poorly written rehash of the movies that are associated with it. My complaint is more about how the character needs to do almost nothing to create 'amazing' games. So he gets a system that will make the game for him and give it to him on a portable easy to use usb device. It will even make patches and updates for him. He just asks his system to do it and it is done. No messy need to have the system upgrade his talent or ability in various areas. Just give the host the finished product.
The story is good the background is also good but it feels like around chapter 35-40 the author got lazy. The translations is very confusing and the translator keeps repeating words trying to make up the word count so that the chapter will cost more points to unlock. This would have been an entertaining read if it wasn’t for the laziness of the author and translator. Im dropping it after spending money, I already saw what I needed.
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Good story but the author seems to have forgotten that the MC's system is supposed to help him level up because it the current chapters the mc has an excessive amount of unused experience points that for some reason he won't use even if he or someone he cares about life is in danger(like in the latest chapter how he almost died but it could have been avoided if the MC had used his exp. points.