Disclaimer: I have enjoyed this story and like the premise but this is a complaining review. I still highly recommend giving this a try. These are just the problems I think exist and they haven't stopped me from continuing to read this. As I read this I come across a few critiques/personal opinions.1. The human race is said to be spaceworthy and traveling to other planets, conquering or making alliances with other races. Yet throughout the story the scale never really feels like that is the case. It consistently feels like the only people in existence are the characters introduced 'on screen'. Ex. He is on a world where the race is said to have been in control of the entire planet and yet I never felt like there were more than a few dozen people living there. Most of the story takes place in training camps that barely seem to have any people. 2. His relationship with the alien woman, Liiza, has come to dominate at least half of the story and is tiring at this point to read about. It was interesting at first but now it is just repetitive. The story stopped being about the MC getting stronger and traveling the universe to find his enemy and now it's all about how he will do anything for his relationship. The relationship that multiple times in the story has been said to be 'toxic'.3. I've noticed this in many stories. When an author wants to make his MC seem smarter or better they will make their superiors dumber or incompetent to lend credence to the MC. This happens here with the MC's military command. Someone in command should not be so flustered or easily persuaded by a teenage boy. Even if the said teenage boy has 'magical alien trauma' giving him OP powers and plot armor.
how to give this author a gem?
Great book... Can't wait to see how it goes
Love the book
Enjoyed reading this amazing book. I like the fact that the female character is strong.
Brilliant book series. Yes there’s some grammar issues, but it’s still a great read!
love reading this story. just wish I could unlock all of it. it's a good attention catcher that is hard to put down.
I couldn't think of a better tribute to the series than the epilogue you made! Thank you for the amazing books and definitely looking forward to the spin off and the kids books!
Even though this book was short, I loved the story line. It got straight to the point but explained everything in detail not to get lost. Love it
Hey author please start updating at least twice a week. Please please please
Waiting for the next chapter so far a great book
it's a really cute story!