Reading the few chapters this novel has right now (6), it has potential, the story is interesting as most non-human novels are for me, but there are some improvements to be done, the first thing is the grammar or sentence structure, don't get me wrong it is readable, but a few mistakes creep in here and there.And another is the wall of text, make paragraphs, it will be much more readable and easier for the eye to read it instead of the whole chapter being in one paragraph. I will stay tuned though and watch your progress in the near future. Keep it up!
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I see a big potential in this novel ! I hope that one day it will become a Manhwa or Manga.Besides that , I am absolutely looking forward to how the story will go after the trauma the protagonist got so far ( I can see that more traumatizing events are coming along the way).Everyone must give this novel a try.
Good novel so far. MC isnt stupid Or an Emo loner that lust after every woman he sees. He has a system and actually thinks on which stats he should increase that benefit him instead of spamming charm. He already has a group of friends but dont worry if you think mc will expose all his secrets. Author already confirmed to me that the mc will not tell anyone about his system or share it to help. (I Really hope this stays true all throughout the story)First entertainment, mc will be streaming. Im Enjoying it so far so please Dont drop.
A very interesting novel at the benining but the naming is abit inappropriate, it should be "the rise of the hogworts!" I am at 100+ chapter in raws and the more I read the more intense the feeling, well in the whole journy we may face a fragmented harry potter story in a watered-down virsion(from a CN 3rd person view), but otherwise, the overall story development is also quite constent. I might change this review if it gets better though.
Hi ,This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyShirley
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