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Life has taught me that you can't control someone's loyalty. No matter how good you are to them, doesn't mean they'll treat you the same. No matter how much they mean to you, doesn't mean they'll value you the same. Sometimes the people you love the most, turn out to be the people u can trust the least.
I'm kinda a new reader since i retired. I came across this book and it sounded nice. The whole story touched my heart. I could really see the character's in my head as i was reading it. I love the ways everyone grew and came out on the other side... It's a happiness that we don't see much of anymore. I Love this book and would recommend it to anyone..no matter what their faith was. Thank you to the author, it made my day smile
I like the story and also appreciate the writer for the description which was given in the story there are many parts of the story which I like the characters design was good and for now I'm waiting for the next update
Wow! bro what a story. Mostly perfect grammar and I love the way you write, the build up to the story. It's beautifully paced, making for totally an immersive reading. There are however a few errors of note. In your synopsis you mentioned, " ...the universe was not done with him and made him awaken in another world. You could have said instead, "...brought him back in another world.
On to the chapter I you state that Aiden was perplexed by 'the lack of support from the police'. Regardless of how vicious or how much of a menace to society his victim was, the police will just consider anyone who kills this rotten apple as a criminal and not as a saviour. That's standard police rational, it's just black and white in their reasoning there are no grey areas. In that regard you might want to say instead, that Aiden was perplexed by the lack of impartiality by the police, as they had already convinced themselves that he was guilty of the crime without bothering to give him the benefit of the doubt. Otherwise... excellent writing bro. Keep up the very high standard.
This book is really the...bees knees. Get it because it's about bees.
A story that is fun with wish fulfilment elements in it. Definitely a must read.
This review is based on the free chapters. MC transmigrates into the body of Chen Yang, the young family head of the Chen family. Does he have a golden finger or cheat? Yes. It's called the Dao Integration Bead. Is it OP? Seems like it, but with limitations. It grows as the family gets stronger/grows. I think this is nice since it allows room for growth. It doesn't seem to have any consequences. Is the MC op? Not really... He can definitely surprise people, but he isn't super OP from the get go, giving room for character development. Is there action? Yes. Is there the typical Chinese revenge plot? Oh, yes. Thankfully it isn't the revenge plot because of a jealous lover though (don't take my word on this. I could be wrong. There are 601 more chapters). Would you continue reading? Yes, I would. Why? Because I want to know if the Chen family Patriarch will get married. Test the waters yourself by reading the free chapters. 40 chapters are enough to see if you like this story or not.
Who iin their right mind would think that you can take a bus from San Francisco CA to New York City NY
It is important to keep the story interesting and consistent in premise. The Author has interesting premise and strong commitment to it. THe problem with System novels is the system aspect becomes just bloat and unneeded. Only to sell the power creep. Hopefully the author will keep that up.
Don't read the book it's a Chinese propaganda in the first chapter itself I have vomited twice by the cringe that they talked about the chinese. Wow Chinese are very brave wow we are very humble. the **** you are humble you are the most shitty country that is taking other country rights openly and saying you are humble. Fuck I am Outta here.
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