*fixes his suit adjusting monocle* Welcome fellow daoists of reading... to another Ash review!! (I've lost count what number this is, but we'll just sneakily gloss over that fact). Ahem, this review should hopefully cover everything and give you the little push needed to read this book (don't let the low number of chaps fool you). I'm not so good with reviews, but I shall try my best! If not... well I offer myself to be eternally shamed and humiliated *internally sweats* Ahem, that said, let's jump in right away. Writing Quality: First off is writing quality... and you can immediately tell that the writing quality stands out from other novels on this platform. It's very, very high and one can tell the author knows what they're doing. Great! 5/5 Story development: I've read up to the latest chap: Chapter 23 (when this review was made) and I can say that the story has progressed quite nicely. I don't want to spoil anything really, but I will say that the prophecy in the beginning has caused quite a few conflicts and unfavourable situations, which is always a good sign when to us readers when reading.Very good. 5/5Updating Stability: The update stability is great! The author uploads a chap every single day, which is hard to do, so props to the author. If you're worried about lack of updates, then fret not because the author has shown they're very consistent. I do also wanna mention, that reading this has become part of my daily routine and I look forward to new chaps each and every single day. Excellent! 5/5Character Design: The MC's name is Jack and he is quite the character. The story is written in first person, so we get to look through his eyes and experience his daily life. Jack's personality is more of the subdued type, preferring books over fighting with a blade... however, that isn't to say his mouth isn't razor sharp when it needs to be. (He can easily win a battle of words.) Some of his statements have made smile and laugh. Next is the sidecharacters and they are well made with more depth being added to them the more we read. Particularly Jack's friends and siblings. Awesome... 5/5 World Background: Due to the point of the story where this review was made at, not much of the World has been revealed, however we are slowly finding out more and more with each chap. I'm excited to find out more! 5/5 (because what has been revealed is very interesting.) Finally, just want to leave a little appreciation message for the author: It takes courage to publish your work out into the world. I hope that more people will read the fruits of your labour and enjoy it. Thanks for writing! And thank you for gracing us with a chapter every day! :)P.s: I apologise in advance if the review is bad ?
Hi it's me, your narrator. It would be a solid book if you actually read your draft twice. Before I criticise you, I want to say that the book would be good if you had a editor.First, there are no periods. Second, some words are not fully formed, and some sentences don't have commas where their are supposed to be. Third, it literally says, chapter one of chapter one.I literally can't read it without cringing.
it is my own novel, so im shameless. Anyways what to expect are.- MC weak to strong-No Harem-Possible Romance-Evolution, not the generic kind.- Pain tolerance like Kanekei.
Okay, what the heck. This novel is absolute gold ? how does this not have more views or collections?First of all, not your typical isekai. The mc has been reincarnated a lot of times, the mc is hot-headed for a prophet and her yearning for destruction is a fresh of breath from the usual generic type of novels that I see. She is honestly absolutely entertaining, I could see this as an anime show. The humor is humoring, the pacing is amazing and done right little by little without skipping too much. The interactions too, it feels like they're real people. It feels like I'm reading a whole new thing and something overproduced. Thank you so much for this gold, author! I will add this in my library HAHAHAHAHA
5 stars because I got hooked on the first chapter. And I LOVE mysterious books.
very fun novel to read i like the world building very much
A very nice book to kill your time with it... According to your test... And time, I really love the story development. My type of genre and love...
Good start, I hope it takes off and continue.I love how the chapters are titled btw:)
Honest ReviewThis is definitely a hidden gem! It reminds me a bit of "Addicted to Curry" for some reason even though the setting isn't quite the same.The Good:The author does a very good job of making the characters believable. The setting is definitely something one rarely sees and a rare setting is hard to find!The Bad: Characters may be well thought out, but still tropes. Regardless, they are done well enough that they stand on their own. I like the setting, but I feel like the early chapters really stretched out the world building, but that's just me honestly, you can ignore that.The Neutral:Not my normal genre once again so I have a hard time getting absorbed into the story, I normally like longer chapters like this, but for stories that I have a hard time staying with I prefer short chapter. Personal preference, nothing good or bad so no stars gained or lost for it.
This book is worth more than my expectation, I'm hooked, y'all come read and get lost ??
First time making a review so I’ll just say this. The story is good. The updates are are about two chapters a day which is good, length of chapters are also good. Writing quality is also good, besides a ghosts name which keeps changing from what I saw. The only bad thing in my opinion is that there is two protagonists, and in my opinion the proper protagonists has nothing special about him being having a good D, and maybe rich I forgot. Xia wenxue, the 25% protagonist, can be said to be a normal protagonist with nothing special about him on the outside, but actually has supernatural strength and talent, like having a super computer like mind (don’t know what else as well yet). Some of the heroines have supernatural like senses and strength as well, and they also seem to have ghost companions as well but are in a coma right now.Ye shengge, the 75% protagonist, however seems to have nothing special about him besides having a bigger D. He has no supernatural strength or senses, and no powerful people who will help him if xia wenxue or the heroines want to kill him. He may be a little smart but nothing like a super computer. And while the some of the heroines have fallen, and have s*x with him, they don’t actually care about him or loyal to him, even though he calls them slaves. He also lets them still have s*x with xia wenxue, which I understand is so xia wenxue doesn’t suspect anything and kills ye shengge, its kind of annoying that he has to hide scared that xia wenxue will kill him when ye shengge is ment to be the proper protagonist.I hope that this in the future changes and the heroines stop having s*x xia wenxue and ye shengge actually gets stronger to protect himself. Besides this, the novel is good.Also there could be a bit more information about the world and the powers of people and ghosts, as it will allow us to understand stand xia wenxue and the heroines strength, and it will also allow ye Shengge to get some strength, if he gets any at all in the story.
Really freaking good so far, I'm gonna continue reading this masterpiece. ?