I haven't really noticed anything racist. The MC mindset is stuck in a very rigid and class oriented world view, but nothing obviously racist.What I don't like about this is that the MC is literally wasting his life until the cheat arrives and then goes on a power trip. He literally skips entire stages of development and does not realize it.The MC has not shown a single redeeming quality, he only depends on his cheat. Without it he would be a less than mediocre and if you look at the way he grew up you noticed that he has entirely been shaped by circumstances.I don't doubt that he is an okay guy, but as a character he is neither interesting nor complex.
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I know the title is reborn as a ice dragon but I feel like it abit misleading since he becomes anything but an ice dragon through his evolution
The problem with this story is how much it repeats itself. You have the story told from the protagonists perspective for 2 chapters then the next 2 chapters are the exact same story told again but with other characters reaction added. This gets tedious pretty fast and results in a glacial plot pace.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I'm interested in seeing where this goes. Keep it up man.
I'm giving the novel 5/5 because it's an incredible attempt at a first novel. It has some issues and the grammar needs work, so it's not my daily reading, but it's stellar for someone's first attempt at writing. I hope the author continues writing because they have a lot of potential. I'll look forward to future works. Cheers!
Idk who paid bots to write reviews but man I was baited ... story is just plain boring chinese propaganda ... read 40 chaps here and gave chance up to 150 and I dont think I was ever this bored with story ... straight out disappointing and Im not even mentioning 1chapter per WEEK ... it will takes years fot this garbage to get fully realeased
The story of the young Leo was an amazing experience for me because of your work I was hoping for you to make another one or continue the series. Please continue your work I hope to see more
Bro let me tell you this, this novel is dank. love it man. the MC is smart and logical all of his actions are somthing that is considered normal but hes not overly OP but just enough. Plus no cliche man, even doe he has a step sister theres no sweat home alabama over here nor annoying talented sister that pisses you of.
As a reader, I like to know what is going on.The introduction is rough, and I don't even know if this is a game or a transmigrator etc. Until later on. It has potential but I am too distracted to enjoy.
I liked the virtual reality world name so much and the main character name as well.. Changing into a new place is really a big challenge. I hope ML will be strong and achieve his dreams.. please continue writing author