This is an amazing book! The synopsos really suits the book! I relly like how you developed the characters in the first few chapters! There are things that you could potentially improve but other than that I think your book is great!
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it says Demon general so hopefully, he builds up his organization as he gets stronger and doesn't just be killing everyone. pretty good start let madam lin have a baby ??
Sadly another trash novel.Mc is too stupid to be even considered human. What a waste of a good novel concept...............................
I'd the author dropping this book please do tell it was a nice novel.........................................................................
One of My all time favorite novel is HN1F, hard to find novels with similar plots focusing on the clan part instead of just it being an arc in the story. Thank you for the novel in advance and I will dig in right now!
It started off real nice, but as time went on it became more and more frustrating to continue reading. How can a person be so submissive and have such idiotic way of thinking?!I understand the premise of him being dependent on his master for both protection and system points, but the way let's both his master and all the others treat him makes me want to puke.Even his own disciple treats him like shit!!!Overall it started off nice(the first 20 chapters), the it went downhill real fast!!!definitely don't recommend it!
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It's an average Chinese cultivation novel of an idiotic MC.What makes it more idiotic is that the author gave him a cheat of a mobile but instead took away most of his brain cells.The mobile has many functions and yet the MC keeps harping about his low talents and doesn't use any of its functions.For eg the mobile has a 'baidu map' equivalent to Google maps which can show the topography as well as the location of cultivators but inspite of that he gets surrounded by demon cultivators (in ch 73)So in the end he is just a mix of non-brained Chinese MC and a normie submissive japanese MC
It's hard to resist such a storyline even the setting are in place. The mood of the story I'm speechless nd is full of surprises. Really enjoye every moment of it
Fun and he doesn’t keep a low profile which is the source of much annoyance in other novels.. also his system is heaven defying but he doesn’t immediately recieve the highest level spirit root but has to work at it.. the translation is good if a bit stunted at times but there are no obvious mistakes.. more please
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