This book is pretty darn good First of all the writing quality is good
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Awesome!!!!! knowing the fact that you are OP and actually using it well enough that's what i like, not like all those other ones where you start doing something unnecessary like using extreme speed to safe a loved one and still end up being a split second late causing little harm and making you go super saiyan mode on someone, in times where you could have just stopped time, teleport, erased him from existence and everything is fine ryt?
Ok. I've read till the last chapters, here we go. First of all, WARNING TO NEW READERS:You'll have a lot of things to ignore on the first chapters. The emotes rarify themselves a lot on the latest chapters so that's one good thing, and he stops pressing enter at the end of every sentence too. So HAVE HOPE!That's the only critical flaws I found writing-wise. Story development-wise, I won't say it's the best I've ever seen, and I mean the man calls himself the trolling master so I mean yea... The POV are sometimes all over the place, and there's little things you could nitpick, but overall, I'll say it and I have pretty high standards, the story was enjoyable.Came here after reading Yggdrasil's pupil, so I knew it was gonna get better. I was right! It does get better. The carefree style of the author stays, but at least you understand what's happening, and how hilarious it is ;)The world-building makes out a pretty dark world, outlining the naïve character of the MC.Naïve, but not stupid, though! Sometimes, I was shocked by how creative the MC's plan were. He just bad at talking to people, leading to lots of misunderstandings.In short, read it ;)
It a fine book not bad not great either. Though later in the book, there’s flash backs and time skips which for some reason aren’t specified when they happen. So it sometimes feels jarring when the Main character is at a place and the next second immediately some where else with no explanation of how they got there.
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This is a fantastic story. The writing is top notch and the setting is great. If you're looking for an awesome read then look no further
Just another great book I came across this month in Webnovel. Author has a really significant skill to make the fiction feel real that I felt like I was right there in the story!
The Synopsis lied. The Mc is the dumbest human imaginable and extremely hateable. The writing quality and world building are good and a story with a plot such as this are wasted on its unlikeable idiot charcters. The Mc especially.
Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs. Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that. And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you.Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow. Keep up the good works, author :D
Decent read .I liked it. One of the better trail reads. The premise is simple to understand and follow. It's a little fast paced in the beginning, but it gets better with more chapters
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