Book has potential. It seems like it would be a good read in future. Keep up the updates
The author here, you know what it is. This is going to be my first proper original story I plan to finish. Check it out and feel free to leave a review if you enjoy.
chapter 5 hurts me a lot, kapanakit mo but keep it up, i'm waiting for the romance chapter, keep it up, we are waiting for the next chapter!
Such a good story with interesting characters and a really good delivery. One of the most interesting and captivating stories I have been reading.I really like the lines that are simple yet meaningful, giving you the image and nuance without excessive description.
This is incredible and mind-blowing. I am in awe in front of your writing skills. Like, seriously. I have only read the first chapter so far and the feeling of betrayal in the very first part... god, you know how to play your audiences.I can’t promise to read this book to the end - or at least not in the time being - since the chapters are a bit long and I already have many books to read. However, for people who are interested in reading a long and well-written book, I definitely recommend this book.
Impressive world-building an idea that is all based on. I enjoyed reading very much and it leaves me wanting more and to know what happens when the MC's true power is revealed to the world. It also leads to ideas and assumptions where did the dungeons come from? What is the monster's motives? How could this all end. All questions the author has plenty of room to develop and eventually answer through masterful storytelling and writing. Great job author don't quit, you have something unique and extraordinary in your hands.
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I suddenly bump into this story and it's easy to read, the story is developing very smooth. Keep it up author/writer, hope to read until it's ending.
Absolutely enjoying the story so far! The atmosphere is so tense, and the descriptions vivid, you feel like you are there with the characters. The story is well paced and well written, grammar and punctuation are good. Can't wait to see what happens next. Would definitely recommend this.
Gerat book just fabouloys no complaints here at all. Work of art only, complaint is the Chapter frequecny should be increased so i can read more of this Novel
This novel is not for those who dislike slow paces, as there is little action as of yet. I personally like how the author is slowly building the world, the people, and the people's situations, in what I can only assume as building up a foundation for the novel to pick up the pace later, possibly going on grand adventures while managing their territory. Somethings I dislike though, would have to be the one-trick pony, Rebecca. She is just barely above useless in terms of her magic, and is portrayed as a compassionate airhead, putting her in an even worse light for me. Her character could be improved later if she were to learn new magic, but I am not expecting much on the personality front, which is ok in the end. The second problem I have would have say would be how Gawain does not use the knowledge he gained from observing the world to its full potential, as it could be used to locate large spots of resources, but it is mainly used as a basic geographical map. Another problem concerning Gawain is how he does not use his knowledge of the present to further technology, but this has been semi-rectified in the later chapters that are currently out, and we can make some speculations about his position in modern society from his actions. The largest problem I have thus far though, would have to be how magic is used, this is never truly explained and readers, like myself, have to make inferences on how magic is cast, made, or studied. I love magic, and I would love to know how the people of this novel use it, which would greatly enhance the novel for people like me. Something I have yet to discuss is the world itself, but you can figure that out just by reading the first third of the novel. I left out quite a few other things I loved and disliked about the novel, although there are vastly more things that I liked than disliked. but overall I Love this novel, and hope it gets picked up, so I can continue to read how the story progresses.Summary- Good novel, highly recommend