Interested in the story, saved to library
I love your other stories as well. Hope to see them updated more
So... following the traditional custom all authors follow, I'm reviewing my own goddamn book. And a 5 star at that(don't want my rating going down).So, if you, my guy, want an MC, who is SMART, SMARTER THAN YOUR PHYSICS TEACHER, who tackles enemies with his brain and magical power, you stumbled upon the right place.Remirg Kryptos is a man of culture and you will obviously raise your eyebrows in disappointment when you read about his uncanny decisions. Simple though they seem.THE OTHER MC, WHO AS USUAL, is a broken guy reincarnated in another world... knows everything blah blah blah...Now I won't spit everything out, so go and read the goddamn book!
Great read! The descriptions are nice and it's nice to find out that Ren isn't OP as soon as he gets back in time.Like I get that he had been a coach and all but if he started steamrolling his way in all his matches then it would have been hard to believe.The author thought things through and made him have his experience but not the strong body needed to execute the moves. It all felt natural and seeing him improve is genuinely entertaining.Hope you continue doing well ?
the story is beautiful and interesting keep it up
Nice read.Just a little more polishing needed here and there for it to be a better read.Good job mate, keep it up.
Hey there, I absolutely love the unique concept behind this insane story. It's really, really interesting and I hope to read more of it going forward!!
This is story has an interesting start I hope you will like it and the writer will keep writing this story and won't stop.Best of luck author for this novel I hope you keep working on
I decided to make a account since there weren't many reviews for this novel. This story is a breath of fresh air for boys love novels. It's marketed as a gaming novel and there is some gaming, but the main focus is on a twenty-something year old boy and his mental health/healing journey with a slice of romance that doesn't take over the plot but emerges slowly.I thought I'd be upset by the slow romance, it's 90 chapters long when I'm writing this review and the romance hasn't romanced yet, but it makes perfect sense.. MC [Xiao Yi] isn't ready at the beginning of the novel, but he does become friends with the ML throughout the novel which makes up for the lack of romance early on. Their dynamic is perfect and ML definitely brings out MC's personality. I love their banter so much. ?
The story was good at the start, AT THE START!!! cool headed, have patience doesn't care about the world except her sister...the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger...I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy. theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb. and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story...Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...
And Kenji just give a solution.
Mamat fell silent then the Writerz immediately broke Mamat's silence.