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Not gonna lie, seeing the score i had high expectations, but sadly i got disappointed. I don't want to be too hard on the author, i know that it's very difficult for him writing in another language, but this novel needs an honest review.Writing quality(2/5): overall the writing quality is barely passable, it's not so bad that it's unreadable, but it's like reading a middle schooler essay... Lots of grammatical errors (missing puntuaction; swapping pronouns) and strange syntax order.Stability(5/5): nothing to say hereStory development(3/5): not really a unique plot, but overall okCharacter design(2/5): the MC is described as cunning and scheming but in reality he is not that smart. He do really stupid things that attract unwanted attention on himself even if he keep saying that he don't want to be noticed (like when he random kills 700 people in the ammission test getting the attention of all the powerful families, or when he reveals his name when supposed to be dead, and many more...)World background(2/5): the background until now is non existent.
I like the story especially the way it introduces the characters, the mc is well written to, i like how if we get a chance to reincarnate to the world we want that would likely be like his one. Anyways great job author-san keep it up pls it's only two chapters but i'm not forcing u, u can take ur sweet time.
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This is a really nice story, I'm not a fan of first person POV but the author did a great job in writing. The synopsis is really nice and the story is something worth reading
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The story has a literal sense to it, there is no fault in the story nor a flaw. The grammar used is perfect, I am not a fan of Romantic Novels but I did like this novel.
I really hope this story will continue soon.
The grammar seems to be a bit off here and there and that makes it difficult to get into the story. Also the main characters thought process seems weird to me, I can't imagine doing any of the things he does if I was in the same situation.
Great read with a since of dark humor. The novel is based off of some d&d campaigns so if there are any fans of the game I recommend strongly for you to pick it up and give it a read.
One of the best of the current batch, something rare nowadays in webnovel........................................................................................
