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how Chinese author's mentions about foreigners in their novelarrogant and wealthy young master from Japan attacking McKorean all bark no bite old geezers.Americans strong+wealthy+arrogant+sci-fi organizationsEngland's Noble's looking down on Chinese poor Mc.Lastly every other country vs china.Still China wins because of the Mc
This is just trash.There is too much info dump without any explanation making it confusing to understand what is going on......................
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The concept of the story is super generic but the writing is good enough that I don't care. I like how the MC just drunkenly fall into his fantasy world. I will definitely be back to read more later.
nice story but hard to follow the flow, jumps from character to character, no explenation on how the story went from point A to point B and suddenly going to point F with no explenation.hoped for better flow After going Premium but It remain the same. I regret spending coins for this quality
This falls drastically short of expectations, the writing was excessively verbose, artistic yet at times disruptive. However, the writing was tasteful nonetheless, the biggest issue remains elsewhere. Thrusted into a scenario, it was somewhat baffling understanding the dynamic, which once again, a minor issue. However it established quite quickly a precedent that I cared little for, spontaneity and ambiguity. The novel wasn't grounded, the escalations seemed inauthentic, and the proceedings confounding. The world, although undeniably profound, was also presented in a shallow manner, there was too large a disparity between the audience and the protagonist, though privy to machinations and the like, I couldn't sympathise, I didn't cheer, I didn't bite my nails in excitement, I didn't really care, there was no underlying structure. I didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do, I understood his overarching goal, but his objectives eluded me, in Profane Prince of Domination, there were objectives he followed, and women pursued in tandem, the story wasn't obfuscated by a plethora of undue circumstances and events. Even the explicit scenes lack the same finesse, the build up was underwhelming or non-existent, the characters lacked the same depth, this isn't a story of debauchery, it's a mess. His choices were equally idiotic and unfounded at times, at least I could only see them as such. Where Konrad whimsically roamed and plundered, this protagonist was farcical and measured as oxymoronic as it may be. I am honestly annoyed I read as much as I did, a far cry from the appeal of Profane Prince, it's insulting that these novels are even likened to one another, I am disappointed that in this novel's considerable depth, everything was conjured so poorly, perhaps this novel isn't one of salacious designs, it nonetheless similarly lacks as one of cultivation, it's an irreparable piece of garbage, truly a waste of the author's expertise. I was disheartened by the lack of chapter updates when starting this novel, but it matters not in the end.
Honestly its good but selling magical stuff is a good way to get kidnapped and tested on and experimented on
Personal opinion…. but author you could really condense the first 20-30 chapters as the majority of the stuff in there feels like really pointless filler. It’s a reall mental marathon getting through it. I’m going to drop this for now.
I need more. Give me more. We all want mooooooore. Please we are starving. Give us more eye food. *Stomach growling noises intensity* Fooooooooooooood.
Everything is great about this novel except the grammar .its getting harder to comprehend the novel phrases. ahhh it hurts seeing such a good novel getting f*cked by language.
It is so demanding and impressive, I love the story and plot. A girl who learned how to kill in such a young age makes me super interested and surprised. She is indeed something to praise with. Luv luv luv
This story will definitely be great . So please do read it. I'm telling this from experience the first part of this story was awesome so keep up the good work author. Good luck with this new story
