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For me the story is quite compelling so if it's tags interest you then you should definitely check it out.
thanks i check it out soon!
If you don't mind a protag who alleys thinks his week and a cowered theen it's decent.
Is the war over until they get married and live happily?
good but many mistakes hope you improve.
Yuri??????????????????????now together???????????????????????????????.......................
As someone who added 36k popularity in total,( 5k on Arisu, 25k on Kazuichi and 10 for tris) I think it's fairly obvious who I'm rooting for as the main couple (if there is).
Ok, just finished reading 19 chapters today after finding this novel, though currently there are 25 chapters available in this novel. And i think i have read enough to write a review.
let's talk about the story first. It had a very soft pace—I mean, it was not fast nor slow. The author did a good job narrating the story and maintaining a consistent pace throughout.(making it difficult for me to believe that this is the author's first novel). I also found no problems with the writing/translation quality.
If you have read the synopsis, this story delivered exactly what you would expecte without any lack. So read the synopsis carefully, if you are very picky with what novel you read (I am extremely picky regarding this). The author removed unnecessary details from the novel, allowing the story to flow smoothly. it also has some mystery elements, some maybe dark?
The author did a good job developing the personalities of the male and female characters up to this point in the chapter. This novel has promising potential for a light novel. Of course, this is not a 500+ chapter novel, but rather a short story with a good plot. Now enough of the positive review..
Now the reason why I am dropping it. If you have read the synopsis, you will have a hunch about the MC's potential to become a yandere, which I believe is a possible character development. And this is what I find uninteresting. Seeing both leads go crazy at each other is not fun for me.
Anyway, I recommend that you try reading this novel. You will undoubtedly get hooked. Reading this book made me think of another book, Behind the Screen, which is the only yandere book I have ever finished.
I read this novel a while ago somewhere else.
The first 800-900 are d*mn good, the novel is a bit h*rny but it's still pretty good
After a certain "event" that happened in chapters 900, I started to dislike the author and the story, he shouldn't have included that kind of thing, apart from the fact that the plot becomes f*ck*ng boring, slow and lazy.
It's like the first 900 chapters were written by someone with good writing and then his replacement arrived who didn't even read what the previous one did and wanted to try to keep up, the MC stops being everything he was, he tries to elevate other characters when that was never the point of the novel, quite a few new waifus are left without much time on screen, those 400 chapters until the end could have been well used but they decided to deviate into other less interesting topics and into boring and disgusting plots and fetishes of the author .
SPOILER
I really enjoyed the story (I read both books). I love Kenby's character but I am confused with certain things. Throughout the whole book I thought that Elias and Kenby were mates or end up together and that's why they had such a deep connection but she ends with someone else...
I loved Cassidy from the Princes of Ravenswood and was so happy that she got her own story. I expected everything to be sassy and quick witted. what was completely unexpected was how much love there is around her, from her mums to her brother (eventually) and Collin to be so patient and accepting.
I want a Second book hate that it’s finished fully enjoyed every part of it
