I wanted to drop at 3 and stuck with it until 10 just to make sure. Flat characters, no context, missing words in sentences causing you to guess at what the author meant. Not for me.
I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? because I barely see any detail containing any one of the tags, and more information would be nice. Also, I haven't really seen the sci fi aspects stand out. In short, the writing itself is good, but I believe the world building and story direction can be better.
I am writing this review solely because I don't want others to miss this gem. I know that this novel's starting is quite week. Readers may get annoyed with the MC's personality and cliche tropes, but trust me it gets really better from ch 50. All detective genre fans must read this book. The premise of the novel is interesting and the character development of MC really satisfies the readers.
Hilarious but also worried he's going to be a simp MC lol
So, here's the author's shameless review, in short, the world-building in the novel is based on a modern world with awakened people our mc transmigrates into this world and becomes an extra. I will do my best to ensure that a regular update is done?. Thank you?
Great story. It's been a while since there's a novel about Check in and Palace plot with war
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. Follow me for exp ;)16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
This is good, there are limitation for some Male protagonist or how far they can go. But with female protagonist, boys and girls adoring MC, action, weak to strong, and with comedy lol
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so it seemed fine at the beginning he has a GF and her father is against it ect. so he is finnaly accepted by the father and girl goes on a mission...ok. the mc then completely forgets about her and starts traveling the girl is not mentiond after chapter 10-15 i forgot. how is she not mentioned and why did he just travel and not leave her anything behind like a note or something to teller he will be back. also when he is getting requests from lord he just accepts them like nothing, he should of gotten resources or something instead of just coins. he is just typical op mc with below average brains and average choppy story.
Only 5 chapters in and I could say this story has a lot of foreshadowing events. The lore itself is great as its a combination of a cultivation novel and a sci-fi novel, which I both love. The author also likes to elaborate on explanations which makes the world very real. Totally recommend.
I don't know what happened to WB but I have to say that the last few batches of trial novels are really not outstanding but disappointing to say the least. In this case you have the typical cliché of a young girl betrayed by her half-sister, stepmother, father and ex-fiance...she stumbled into the first man that crossed her road who magically is a young, rich, handsome and overbearing CEO who rules the world ....She got drugged, had *** and got pregnant... what to say? There's nothing new here!!! Continue your road! Worse in this badly written one everything happened in the first 10 chapters or so....you know how this will end up so why wasting time?