The grammar needs to be fixed. It’s difficult to read
Abusing women is not heroism and glorifying it and making women fall for such abusive jerks for no reason is not cool. Disappointing 2 chapters so will not be continuing.
This book is amazing the way the suspense line goes is incredible. Nice book you got here.
I love the story and the plots.But I have a suggestion hope u dont mind miss author like if there's a flashback there's should be a signs cause it's confusing sometimes specially they are taking the whole chapter(s)and also I preferred if what's being said in the female pov is not necessary
so intriguing, I enjoyed the book.
interesting...
I hate reading series because you have to wait to continue the story. Loved both of them wonder how long we will have to wait for the remaining
cute story
I am giving a three star as grammar, syntax and spelling are below average. It’s a poor translation you can tell. Good Novel should include quality control and editors. Is a pity. I am non native English speaker and have a hard time following. Which doesn’t happen either other authors / stories.
great book! can't wait to read the next one
The bookstore scene is genuinely one of the most vivid settings in this whole novel. Let me paint it for you: Jolene walking through Sunset District's secondhand shop, flipping through Danielle Steel paperbacks, noticing the price ranges, watching kids sit on the floor reading picture books while sci-fi fans browse Ender's Game in the corner. The author doesn't just describe the place—they make you feel the texture of this world. $3 for vintage rentals, $25 for hardcovers, the specific titles on display (A Game of Thrones, Sex and the City, Executive Orders)—these details ground the story in a real time and place. Then there's the swimming lesson scene. Two hours at the pool, Jolene and Emma watching Ben splash around, the envy in their eyes. Emma calculating that eating Uncle Giovanni's food will help her grow taller. The domestic warmth of it all. And Giovanni! 'With his deep-set eyes, black curly hair, and expressive face, he spoke with great animation.' One sentence and I can picture this guy. Former head chef, poached for a high salary, visibly relieved that Jolene didn't get chased out like the last nanny. The three-story house, the three staff members on payroll, the Sunset District setting—every detail reinforces that this is a wealthy but not ostentatious household. Raymond is young, capable, carrying the family on his shoulders. The world feels lived-in. I could walk through these rooms.
Aww... such a good book. I really enjoyed reading it.