Vennom
The story took an unexpected turn. It was meant to evoke either a tragic or uplifting emotion, but then came the lackluster and dull combat scenes. The issue wasn't with fighting in general, but the execution here fell flat. Not every narrative requires a skilled fighter as the protagonist; if it's going to feel underwhelming, it's better left out.
Next came the glaring logic gaps – a scene where every character in the story seemed to possess an IQ of three, unable to comprehend even the most obvious situations. The portrayal of the beast race leaders, with their apparent two-digit IQ, was particularly cringe-worthy. Even the supposedly wise shark grandmother didn't fare much better. As for the main character, his behavior felt unrealistic for a grown adult from our world. If the amnesia explanation had been employed, I might've been more lenient. But this just doesn't make sense.
If this were a purely romantic novel, I might've kept reading despite the flaws. If it were an action-packed adventure, I'd still give it a chance. Mixing genres is fine, but when illogical plotlines and one-dimensional characters collide, it becomes unbearable. Frankly, I can't tolerate this combination.
Before diving into this novel, I've heard numerous individuals express their annoyance with the main character's demeanor. However, personally, I believe this perspective isn't entirely accurate. The MC自觉地意识到自己的个性并不完美,他承认自己会因脾气暴躁而对琐事动怒。但他最令人欣赏的地方在于他的坦诚和勇于改正错误。每当男主指出他的过失或给出建议时,他不会固执己见或抵触,而是诚恳地承认错误,倾听指导,道歉,并承诺下次会做得更好。我觉得这一点非常值得称赞。而且,他在日常生活中的小糊涂和搞笑场景读起来确实很温馨可爱。
Rated high , for such a disappointment
Needs Isekai tag
damn i really enjoyed this too. not everythings goes our way ig
Can someone explain why there is a “INCEST” tag?
I feel like so far (as of Chapter 90) the pacing is both too fast and too slow. It seems like the MC has barely done anything but also rushes to whatever happens next. Theres barely any down time for the MC to actually train since it seems like every 3 days he is forced to move to a different location. It's definitely a good read but the pacing just keeps throwing me off, especially with chapters that make it seem like there was some sort of progression between the chapters which can make it confusing at times.
I wonder how forward the romance is. The story description sounded interesting until the romance plot stuck its head in.
1 year later... No one responded... He probably wont ever know considering he is still karma lvl 1. RIP for my Boy. Also to the person reading this comment: How long has it been since this was posted?
I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed this! I started with the webcomic, reading up until Chapter 45, which is around when Fairy Lu first encounters the blacksmith, marking the beginning of her business venture. After that, I switched to the novel. The translation is exceptional; it's a gem you definitely shouldn't miss. Although not fully translated, the spoilers hint at a heartwarming ending, as we'd expect.
The chemistry between Fairy Lu and the male lead is fantastic - their connection in the webcomic illustrations is simply captivating, and the spark between them is evident from their very first meeting. What I appreciate is the comic relief in the story; it lightens the mood, making the angst more bearable, and allowing us to form genuine connections with all the characters, even the supporting characters like the maids.
The emperor, who is ML's father, is portrayed as both attractive and kind-hearted, adding a delightful touch. As for the pace of the novel's beginning, I can't comment since I haven't read it yet. Some have mentioned it's slow, but starting with the webcomic, the progression feels incredibly enjoyable and of high quality, so it might be worth giving it a chance.
This is a heartwarming and fluffy tale that's perfect for passing the time! Lil Bun, the主角的儿子, is indeed adorable, as many reviewers mentioned. He's not overly intelligent or mature, but rather slightly more aware and obedient compared to other novels. In contrast to common storylines, Lil Bun actively contributes to the development of the main characters' relationship, rather than being overshadowed during romantic growth.
The story includes some slapstick moments, but the main character (MC) has a bit of an overpowered presence, so there isn't much competition. The romance might be slower-paced, which could frustrate some readers, but those who enjoy a patient male lead and gradual love story will appreciate it.
Here's a brief summary of the main characters' backstories (major spoilers ahead!):
In the original world, MC lost her parents in an accident and relied on a sponsor for support, never meeting him in person. She adored this person and found solace through their connection. The sponsor disappeared before MC's reincarnation.
In the present world, MC solely focuses on her son due to her solitary life and dedication to raising him. She maintains a distant demeanor towards others, including the male lead (ML), who initially pursues her.
The surprising twist is that ML is actually the sponsor from the original world. He died in an accident and reincarnated, initially unaware of MC's identity. As he gets to know her through her performances, he realizes his connection. Throughout her past performances, he was always in attendance and collected records of her music.
The story progresses with ML gradually pursuing MC, who is unaware that Lil Bun is his son. MC initially rejects him, mentioning a long-term love, but it's later revealed that the love she refers to is her past connection with her sponsor. Once MC uncovers ML's true identity through the vinyl records, the sweetness of their relationship begins to blossom.
Positive aspects:
- MC's younger sister, Ye Li, starts off rude but later understands her mother's mistake and doesn't envy MC's wealth.
- ML's character is commendable for accepting MC's son, even without knowing he was his own, and his patience in pursuing her.
Negative aspects:
- MC seems overly talented, both as an actress and musician, which might seem unrealistic.
- Her personality lacks depth, especially before her relationship with ML, making it difficult to connect with her character growth.
- The backstory of how the child came about is minimal, and ML's reaction when they first slept together is not explored.
- ML's role shifts abruptly from an actor to a babysitter and love interest.
- Tang Jin's reveal feels underwhelming compared to MC and ML's connection.
- The pace of the romance and character developments might be too slow for some, and the plot twists, such as live broadcasts and acting tests, can be predictable.
In conclusion, this is a relaxing novel with plenty of sweetness, particularly towards the end. It's worth sticking around until the latter chapters (around chapter 100+) to witness the blossoming relationship between MC and ML. The story offers moments of revelation and a satisfying conclusion.
When I saw the cover i thought he was wearing a shining monocle on his right eye ?, but it was just cringe fireye.
But I was tricked, so maybe I will read it.
