Nice novel. The story beginning is quite interesting. Mother dying on son's arm isn't that rare but it's emotional. Not only that the revenge plot going makes ur blood pumping and u want the xu family get extinct. Anyway, writing skill is good but dialogue is the best.
Anyway, keep updating the chapter.
And read this novel, it is worth it.
Looking at the story objectively it is really good. But for some reason I just can't get into it. Not sure if I'm just not in the mood for this story, or what, but it just doesn't grab me and force me to read until there is nothing left to read like other stories.
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Hello, Eshwar here, it is officially chapter 200!!! Yay!! When I started I didn't think much about my novel, now I have come to love it and it is my second millstone!! All of the interactions have helped me a ton, though I don't know how to say anything else except thank you, and again my head is filled with spoilers so let me know how the novel is please, then until next time [Peace] Thank you for reading.Thank you for all the comments, you may not know but they have helped me a lot to continue writing, so again thank you very much.
Keep it up author! This novel will soom rise to the top! This novel is one of the best out there and a hidden gem! It was so good and amazing! Don't drop or it would be a shame. Top 25 here we go!
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Gaia shouldn't have been killed. That was very sad. But I understand that this was necessary as a trigger to arouse the MC's desire for conquering the world by making use of his system.Maybe, everything was programmed by the system so that he underwent a major personality change, who knows...Be that as it may, this romance has been pretty good so far and I hope the MC isn't traumatized when relating to future women.
Tags are misleading. While it is not a “harem” it is the closest you can get without being one. MC simps for the girls he meets in the first 5 chapters.Also his “easy mode” is not actually easy mode. All the characters are capped at 10 on all stats. Which means anyone who reaches level 30 are already on even playing field. Which 8 people already are from his party within second day.In short this is a story from 10 different view points and takes 100 chapters just to progress to the third day. MC is not OP even though the author tries his hardest to make it seem like it.
Ahem!With just the description of the story I have already started to get interested in even though I have still not read itSo even if I end up not liking the story I will not lower my review about itThen I will now go and read the storyGood Bye Author!
Seeing that there are like no chapter comments and only one review so far... I’ll give a review because I’ve read all 13 chapters so far and it has been wonderful. Saitama fits in seamlessly into this world the author has spun with a careful hand. The grammar has small mistakes here and there but it’s high up on the quality scale. The world building has been wonderful thus far I’d recommend this book to everyone I can. If you like one piece or one punch man... this book is a must read.
Though I have a few bits to criticize, it's good so far.
The first, and most important, is that all the dialogue sounds like the same person. It helps a lot with fleshing out a character to give them a unique voice. It doesn't have to be as large a change as Yoda or as obvious as the "desu" some authors plant at the end of a sentence, but it really helps if something changes based on who's talking. It also helps break the feeling that you're reading someone tell you a story instead of reading a story.
Another thing to remember is that events in reality have a pace to them. It can be easy to write paragraphs about the thought process in the moment, and maybe that's how it actually happened in their head, but readers either lack the speed of thought or the IRL influence forcing their attention so it draws ******* out of a situation. If the situation is easy or doesn't require their attention, that makes sense, but if it's a desperate or intense situation it can disconnect the reader from the story. Basically, try to keep the intensity of the reader's experience the same as what's going through the MC's head.