Author please continue on your wonderful journey. This story has great potential & it is amazing. I fell in love with within 3 chapters & I cant wait for your updates.
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An excellent read this is great work, I love it keep working hard love your work. Keep it up Author and update more chapters soon, great job, I highly recommend your novel . ?✔️
just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did.but ?the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day.creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload.right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. butyou just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....
Good story, fairly well written, terrible ending. Given the ending I do have to say that the author acknowledged the problem and basically had written himself into burnout. So credit for providing an ending, even a terrible one.
Deserves to be continued and go up and shine among the big wigs of the novels community.Eagerly waiting for the novel to get updates again. Full support.
No depth. Should just start on another novel.
I love the novel and the author is so funny with how they comment on everything ?
From the 4 books added to the trial this week this one is the best, you can except a primitive world with a unique power system + a MC how thinks like a normal person rational person not somebody full of hormones and heroic spirit with the first thought being to teach primitive people that slavery is not right!!! Beside some weird sounding sentences that could have been better everything is good.
If you are stopping in the very start itself then, you shouldn't have started to write the damn novel.And it doesn't take much to update a chapter occasionally...
Well written, the MC’s personality was realistic and we got to see some of his inner workings. Consistent logic, well as much as can be when magic is involved. It was a bit of a leap at the end though. But very, very hot. 10/10 as an evening read ??
Love it and cant wait for the story to progress more. Love how its going already. Cant wait for more chapters to come out. +1 new devoted fan