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It was pretty good at first, then? I believe the author used techniques such as sitting, walking and jumping on his keyboard to write this story. (I'm so moved by the story and how hard-working the author is as you can see.)
In a world where humans have no difference to a regular broccoli, Zhongshan clan babymaker (mc) embarks on journey to fight against the world even the Dao that obstructs his path to recover the prestige of his race .
bro im sacred now that i know it has netrorare tag , is it worth it in kingdom building prespective?
btw still giving it a try will be waiting for your ans ...
Liarrrrŕrrrrr do not start this lot of loop holes and worst ending
of all names,wEHY THE F*CK sophie?!?!?!!?i mean literally any name in Chinese but sophie????the author seriously couldn’t pick anything else??? im only at chapter 3 and the story ain’t bad but it needs work i’ve been reading the comments and a lot of people been complaining about it going to in depth and it gets too slow paced soo im guessing this is going to be like castle of iron black where it is exceedingly slow paced i just hope the author will fix this up by the time i catch up.well lets keep reading(ps: if anyone knows other sites for reading japanese and or korean novels please tell me)
How come this female lead not call her son at all? It seems like she's not even his mother. The poor kid.
Love that this story really focuses on the main female lead and her development. Especially, how the author takes the time to do a step by step in fixing things instead of skipping over things and magical everything done.
This hidden gem, need more readers
Good:
-Unique novel
i dare to say the novel build new genre... why risk yourself fighting them if you can defeat enemies by stealing them? their fate is worse. than death to them!!
i myself get tired from all this alike novels Transmigration, Reincarnation, Sexual Cultivation.
-Nice MC grow over the story
the story begin with coward MC and inexperienced which is understandable because how young he was, eleven i guess? he will get better as he grow
Bad:
-Harem
Sadly most What's lack the novel, only one girl (that was confirmed mutual love) and she will not around for unknown time...
-worldbuilding
The continent of first book was kinda boring.
Hopefully the second book fix this two.
I enjoy reading honestly reviews and I think I should provide one. as of chapter 30, the MC is given an amazing ability and is coming from a place of no ability in a world of super powers. what does he do? does he plan, learn, and be cautious while growing stronger? no, he is greedy and only survives due to luck and plot armour. it is disappointing seeing how the mc can be aware of his fragility and still rush into death like an idiot. I dislike seeing the other perspectives and even skip them because I don't care about these other individuals. it is a good story compared to a lot of other garbage on here but no where near flawless.
Nice novel in the worldI will realy like this novelPls vote for Yahya nizar Congratulations Yahya nizar????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I actually don't write reviews that much. BUT I just want to say, this novel is all over the place. There's not a single chapter where I am not cringing, horrible description of magic, characters have no personalities of their own. Just follows most Chinese stories. And it's a harem, by the way, shouldn't have read it from the beginning. This may look like I am dissing the Author but please do. The story has so much potential if it was just made well. The harem dragged it downhill with the BS author was talking about his magic. The conversations were also very awkward. I just can't.
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