This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Give it a try; as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I will improve as I keep on writing PS. Positive Suggestions are always open and welcome.
Let me start off saying that this is a story written very well. The author is on point with his structure and grammar.That being said this is not a story for me personally. I find the MC a bit one dimensional. He is a bit boring. Here a few pros and cons based off what I have read already:Pros:-Great writing style-Good background information-Story moves along at a good pace-Main character starts of very wealthy and innately strongCons:-Main character is boring-Main character starts of very wealthy and innately strong (my opinion)As you can probably tell I'm dropping this because the story doesn't hook my attention. These rating are my opinion and may not reflect what others/majority fell.I do encourage you to read the first few chapters or even just the first chapter to suss out your own opinions on the story. Thank you and may you enjoy your stories.
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Disclaimer: Types of stories like these are not my cup of tea, so I won’t lie, I did not go far in this story. But from what I read, I will give an honest review. It is a good story for readers who lije stiff like this. Your writing is good and interesting, although you have grammar mistakes that need to be fixed(dialogue and the big spaces you have between the commas). Break up your paragraphs a little, too. Other than that I seen no other problems, your character building is good and the ones who like stories like this, will enjoy it. Keep up the good work!
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Guys help me review this novel...I would appreciate that thank you?and yeah I am giving 5.0 for myself ??you guys can be honest tho??
As of this review, 36 chapters have been published. Writing quality—quite good. Some grammatical mistakes here and there but nothing too distracting. A little clean up will do the trick. In terms of flow... wow. There wasn’t a moment where I wasn’t sucked into this story. The story switches between the first POV of the main protagonist, the self-proclaimed Demon Lord and Magic King Rupert, and the third POV of the people he had chosen to include in his grand plot. Both point-of-views were fun and entertaining, and I found that there was never a boring moment in either of these POVs. The story centres around an ex-magical-overlord-turned-filthy-rich-businessman named Rupert Hargreaves, who, after being reincarnated into a different world, finds life to be a tad too boring for his diabolic, mystical tastes. In order to satiate his boredom, he indulges himself into the world of fictional entertainment (and the internet)—especially anime. Soon after, he brings his hobbies into the real world and began an anime-esque experiment/production in real life involving real people with his equally twisted deadpanned secretary, Alice Kang. The overall premise of the story is similar to that of ‘To Be a Power in the Shadows!’ or ‘There Was No Secret Organization to Fight with the World’s Darkness so I Made One (In Exasperation)’. It is a story of a guy who is both bored enough and powerful enough to create a whole fantasy just because he could. In my honest opinion, this kind of plot is fun but hard to execute as the scale is quite large. On top of juggling between several protagonists in different settings, one would also need to make coherent ‘pulling-things-from-behind-the-scenes’ plans that doesn’t rely too much on Deus Ex Machina... or maybe just heap it on so that the humans will actually survive until the (obviously planned but shh) Last Boss battle... lol. In any case, it is advisable for the author to take caution in writing the story as it is easy to derail and make it tedious and boring to read. Last but not least, my favourite part about this story—which I didn’t realise until more than a few chapters in—was the fact that this story involved a lot of queer characters. Also, the Uyghur girl? I have no choice but to stan.All in all, this was a very enjoyable read and I look forward to more! Good work, author!
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I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I suck at review lol but really good book and webnovel hates me because they want it to be more than 140 letter long but webnovel can go and su-
I just found this gem. Writing quality is best from orginal novels that I have read so far. I really hope author return's to write more chapters, when he has time again. I will but this novel in to my library so I can see when he returns.
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