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Tsundere? Check.Slice of life? Check.Female master? Check.Gender equality? Trivago.This is a 5 star review. Nothing special about it. Now go and read the book.
MINOR SPOILERS ABOUT POWERS/PLOT!(Didn't hide review due to spoilers, because the spoiler is very minor in my opinion)I cannot claim to be a professional or even above avg. on reviewing books/novels. I consistently try to find good novels that have technology as the super power. What I've typically seen is that the MC seems to skip a lot of crucial steps in progression to what I assume is to just speed up the plot. I've enjoyed reading your characters thought process/actions he takes to build his company so far and thinking further than just making the best tech by starting from the resources themselves and not limiting himself to what we can recycle as of now. The way he uses his abilities, the length of time his training takes to get to an "Intermediate/Advanced" lvl and even him branching out into different fields to take advantage of his mind instead of just relying on his tech makes your MC seem more realistic (If you can call a super powered individual in a fictional universe realistic). Anyway, judging from the upload times and the reminder of this being a new thing for you in the description I know that writing isn't a top priority for you, but I would absolutely love to watch you find a genuine passion/obsession for writing this story and make this at least a decently long (300+ chapters) story.
In class, the teacher asked the students to imagine they're in a battle field and write essays about their encounters.As the teacher supervised the essay writing, he finds one student idle.Teacher:Why are you not writing?Student:I got killed the moment the first bullets were shot.
Worst detective story ever. There is like zero logic applied to the mc's claims of what happened in a case. He has no evidence what so ever to support his claims/story of what happened before he acts on the things he knows from his system.
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overall the quality is genuine and this mf wrote 18 chapters in a month.. the plot quite eye catching, I'm amazed by the story line it seems like a reality fiction thanks for sharing such a vibrant story
So, you finally posted this story on webnovel. Anyway, it is an amazing book just like your other books. Let's hope we can see more books coming here, especially Hero's Daughter. I would love to talk more about the content but let's not spoil it and let the readers enjoy the story.
Great but short first thanks anyway I hope to see more soon. I am not sure what I should recommend so i am just going to tell you to keep working tx.So Yo is out ! !
another Chinese dump. .trash supreme. nothing except braindead plot. useless mc gets op power but does useless things , torture us with his nonsense harem nd same old last generation faceslap. old rich grandpas running around acting poor ,, class belle poor girl ,, mc getting money like rainwater in tsunami ,, money hungry harem --- idiot protagonist. .ruined my whole mood I JUST WONDER WHAT LEVEL OF DRUGS AUTHOR NEEDS TO SURVIVE THIS AND CONTINUE WRITING MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS BRAINLESS PLOT ..
Right of the bat we start off with a tournament that took 40+ chapters, skipp...............................................................