Not sure why kakashi hatake likes it so much and did master Jeriahufffc really write this if he did write it why doesn’t it say so also naruto could use this book and saskue also sai and probably choji Where all my naruto fans at
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Hi, this is a honest review here.Writing quality : 3/5Update stability: 5/5Story development : 4/5character design : 3/5World background: 4/5The author is very passionate and love his work. However he is new to this. This book is atypical to ero books, with weak character designs- power mechanics and plots, but it is still a fun read. Sure around half the time the book is unrealistic and not immersive. But if you can treat this story as a pass time and not one of your favorites then, give this book a try.
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i just want start that i have no idea about stability of updates(i just idk)and the writing quality is ok so {three star} for both of them, also i am just at chapter 33 so idk what happens at ex:page 114 or something happens idk what it is,i am just at page 33.let's start with world background,as far chapter 33, world building is justsecond coming of gluttony but watered down,it fantasy world with levels, that it really it and the levels do not made a difference,MC just one to two shot everything so why? have it at all? to be honest with you. i thought the world would be like idk a woods with fog and it night time all around at the start, and when the MC show to a town it just reveals to generic fantasy,what if? instead of fantasy it dark fantasy with horror, like the town is silent hill but in a fantasy setting and everyone is off,for word background {two star} for being second coming of gluttony butless interesting thing in the worldfar as story goes,MC get op almost at the start,then kill everything and get all the women in 30 feet radius of him,that it, very early on the MC get out as a demon two times but nothing happens,MC just run out town,no one comes get him,no wanted posters,nothing happens with it,might as well not have happened in the first,which is a problem that comes up over and over again,the MC can do the worst thing possible and nothing bad will ever come to him at all.{one star}character are just a mess,every one but MC and his women he simp toare just forgettable and bland,so to is the MC, but the MC is well the MCso you can some what remember him a little bit( i say that but i forgot his name lol )if you cut 60 to 70% of the character,the story well mostlystay the same,most character are just there to die,that it.for the MC idk what his deal is, he just kill anything, that not personality, that a hobby,he and female lead hate each other very much but for no reason at all?!?! that do 180 and love each other?!?!?!(one star) WQ:3SOU:3SD:1CD:1WB:2the total score is 2.0 but maybe a 2.3 or2.4
Waiting for updates due to the reason of being addicted in reading this story of Ezra's journey to the peak!
This is just wow!! It hurts ngl because reality sucks and sometimes the things we imagine actually comes through. I've definitely felt that part where rhianne just said "OK"I already knew she was hurting from within.Hope you make a new book after this, loved it (though I'm going to read it when I have time again, goodluck tho !!)
i love it .
Excellent is the only word to describe It, the story please add more chapters thats the only thing i ask, Please
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