very neat story and contains potential
Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel.Premise amazing!Story? highly engaging!Action and battle scenes? Superb!!The Sauce?....beyond tasty.I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.
Honestly,It was a pretty good read,definitely a good story but it feels a bit rushed.Take my Word for it,Read it and It's quite interesting,not the best but a definitely a good read
a unique story of a young aspiring adventurer on the run, hunted and forced to be strong or die trying, all the while the gods watch her struggles as a form of entertainment
This book is different from the other system books I've read before. It is so refreshing and well written. ??? The MC is also so mature that he is likable.Fun read but it would be so much better with more scenes including the involvement of the system i suggest upgrading the role and functions of the system
This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.
Not really a shame the author dropped this novel considering the end was going to be quite disappointed anyway. Great while it lasted but the author clearly lost motivation way before ending the novel since the unfinished arc wasn't enjoyable to the slightest. The protagonist was great as he was, a selfish young man with mental illness but the author clearly had other plans for him which would surely just make him another protagonist just slightly more mature. Small amount of plot-armor here and there, the world building was average, the cultivation system is average aswell. What made this novel slightly unique is it's side characters which some of them have genuine personality but I always had the feeling their life revolved around protagonist despite the author saying they don't.
After reading this novel, I felt so motivated. It changed my whole life, now I'm a successfull person. I got 10 olympic gold medals, 6 Oscars.Next year I'm planning to buy moon.It's all happened because of this novel. Thank you so much, author-san?
Saw the synopsis. I simp maids!!..............................................................................................………………..........
This story progresses well, the only flaw which, I would say, needs improving was the author's writing quality. The author highlights the narrative with the use of many adjectives, this, in itself is fine, however these adjectives have not been used to their full capacity which in turn makes the read slightly cliche and annoying. This is aided with the use of 'pointing out the obvious'. For example, "it was a scene almost everyone had gotten used to as it happens quite often" - the reader already knows that it happening frequently is how everyone had gotten used to it, there is no need to clarify. The constant clarification and not leaving things to the reader's imagination takes the enjoyment and thrill out of reading such works of art, and thus makes them bored; and for the author, it is harder for them to create dramatic twists and turns in their plot. I would also suggest to go back and read through the grammar again to spot the small errors which need refining.I am aware that this may be a lot to take in for the author, and I do apologise if it is. The writing and plot were well, the author has potential, so please do not be disheartended, there were only very small corrections which need to be made.
good one................... better than I expected I never thought that I will enjoy this Novel but I did but this is a pretty good time Novel I am just gonna continue reading it
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