it's already so popular,, so good novel, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work hoping for the next chapters's
truly best, I am impressed just by chapter 1 author.you have my full support.
This story is extremely well written and I can tell a lot of effort has been put into building the world and MC. There are very few grammatical errors due to the author actually caring about the readability of his novel that you don’t typically see in other novels of this level. The author is actively taking suggestions from his readers which contributes to how well the story reads. One thing that I believe the author does well in this novel is keeping the flow of the story consistent and reliable. I think the main contributor to this is the fact that the author plans out events ahead of time, outlining key events and chapters before writing them to connect seemingly insignificant details that you might look over to events later on in the story that would have played out much differently.
As I'm about to reach 100 chapters, I think it is best to leave a review now. Writing Quality: I leave it 5 since, although alterations slowly appeared, I am consistent on the quality, from complex to simple, as I'm also experimenting and learning along the way. If you dislike something, do let me know!Stability of Updates: It's undeniable that the first month's updates sucks, but after I got into premium, I have been consistent in updating 2 chapters per day. Although I wonder how will I be able to remain consistent while studying in a state university, but, hey, I'm trying my best!Story Development: A shameless five stars. Firstly, my foreshadowing and my not outlined plan in my head has been consistently written with some alterations, of course. Secondly, although I have yet to end the volume 1, I am confident that the development will lead to what I have envisioned as I was meticulously setting those flags. Lastly and most importantly, the story development are deeply aligned to the characters and world background without straining each other.Character Design: Another shameless five stars. From Qwanisha to others, they have a very dinstict character aspects, that even I, the author, felt like I was not writing what they are supposed to say, but narrating what they are saying. Comically, even I found my side characters unpredictable--of course, except my main character since we can easily familiriaze how he reacts. As the MC and his beasts are the limelight, I am trying my best to design a likeable different characters of his beasts.World Background: Another shameless 5 stars. I introduced races and was trying my best to put emphasize to them--faeries, luminaries, something you weren't familiar with. These races are relevant on their relationship with the humans, especially the main character and side characters. Of course, we should talk about the Tower--It is an existence that challenges the invited players to ascend each floor. I am currently focused in The Trial, as it covers two volume--Volume 1: Hellish Trial, Volume 2: Heart of the Burg. However, the Trial already emanated the challenges of each floor should be, resulting on taking some time to formulate it to the best of my abilities. In addition, the world building has a heavy emphasis on this story, as the world not only revolve around the Tower but the Earth, i.e. its current state, technology, etc.FAQ 1: Will there be romance author?As of now, I haven't decided on the female lead yet, so it might happen on Volume 3.FAQ 2: Harem?Sadly, no. I'm not into an idea of being in a relationship with more than one.FAQ 3: Is MC an idiot?Hmm, if you are used to being alone and have faced the harshness of the reality, you will have a different values and vision. He might commit some mistakes, but he'll continue to learn.FAQ 4: Aren't you shameless for giving your first review and rated it as 5 stars?I am, no doubt, an author who disliked his stories, but this one... I like it. Since I am the first to give a review, why won't I be biased? XDNow read it and let me know your thoughts!
Could’ve been great, but the author is mudhead and his main character is just a fucking douche bag sleaze ball
One of my favorites now. Read the author's notes/warnings, accept it and enjoy the story. Good writing after you get through the first few chapters. They are not bad by any means but, like most novels, need build up. MC's personality is clear and consistent right from the start: domineering and single-minded in his goals. He will do somewhat unspeakable things. But the author made that clear from the start. The sex/smut scenes are, in my opinion, divine and yes you can call me a degenerate. But they really are exciting to read. Plot is intriguing enough. World building is sufficient. Not a lot has been revealed and that just keeps you wanting more.Gonna be parking my stones and GTs here for a good while.
I really love this one as it has a mix of both an op mc and smut (being a man of culture it's important), yes there are some things that annoy me like the rose part in the war arc but other than that this novel is very good with an excellent story development and updates by the author
nice ? it's really goodif i say.... ?????
Oh! Man, MC looked badass when he underwent Inverse Mode. Keep it up.But the surroundings can be described even more, try to focus on that, except that, I liked your Novel.??
This ongoing WebNovel is a must-read for anyone who loves a good story. The author's writing style is so engaging and the world they've created is so immersive that I'm constantly captivated by the story. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally, and the ongoing nature of the story only adds to the excitement and anticipation. I highly recommend this WebNovel!
amazing book ... and is very attractive
Nice story, can't wait to read more. Good job author !