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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ????????????????
The story is fresh and has an interesting plot, as the author I tried to put in dept in my characters, and the story line is one that is not common. I hope you guys checks it out and also live a review.
I Enjoy this novel but it is a Faloo novel so i can only give it 1 star
i had seen your novel before but never really read it because of the videogame tag , I thought it was another of those VMMORPG where everything doesn't really matter in the end since it's just a game ( I like high stakes so not my genre). maybe changing the tag would attract more readers like me , who knows. on the novel itself , It is really unique and the plot is original. I love it. don't feel the need to answer to some complaints with no constructive criticisms like I saw in some Q&A. do it your style. i particularly like the MC , his slow fall in craziness, his logic, his personality and his real "evilness". too many novels make supposed evil MC following the "demonic" ways not being evil at all or needing some sort of justification for each act like you said in a Q&A. and the real evil MCs on this website all end up in a erotic novel (which I don't mind but kind of repetitive after a while and really focused on the *** part which is the genre anyways so no right to complain). quite a paradox that by giving him a real goal and meaning for his evil , you got rid of the evil but needing justification trope. (don't know if I'm clear , english is not my first language).also enjoyed how he ended up corrupting the fairy. I was a bit annoyed with the fairy at first but knew that you were gonna take some direction with it as it didn't seem like your style so far and there would be no development in a story if every character was perfect and done from the start. I almost regretted you not showing her original character of covert agent a little more after I saw how low she fell. hope we will see more of that subplot in the future. overall really love it , my review might not be very constructive but hope you will keep the good work .
So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?
I would give a five star for this book a five star but I can’t trust this man and his characters. He updates a lot though and writes many a chapters.
If Supreme Uprising is conjugated to surprising I'd have no qualms about it. This novel starts slow in the first chapter but picks up real quick and within the 20 or so chapters you'd already have a complete arc which is rare in types of stories.Most authors would've probably just drag it out and make and satisfaction won't set in until the hundredth chapter, but SupRising isn't that kind of story. If you're looking for an interesting Systems Genre story with a whole bunch of face slapping, then this is the novel for you. Cheers!
I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)
Bad Story development and the character design is so garbage at all. I wouldn't rate it 2.4 stars if it wasn't for the good writing quality and world background .
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