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I think I found a hidden gem. It's an excellent novel. Good character depth so far. I have to say the originality of the story is the best part.There are a few things I disagree with, such as him getting back together with the princess. I also see a lot of people complaining about him being too friendly with the protagonist. However, for me, that's part of the originality of the story and doesn't bother me at all.It's always good to have a cold personality paired with a chummy one. I'm currently caught up with the last chapter, 94. It seems like it's going to be around 1000 chapters, given the progression of this story, give or take.
such a good story as it progresses........
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Immerse yourself in this enchanting novel! I’ve just started reading it and it’s already drawing me in. Asher, Zarafea, Lady Margaret family all have this tension that I can’t wait to explore! Not to mention the gods and their intrigue. I can’t wait for more updates!!
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The author is a very nice and well-mannered person. (I deleted my comment, which was not specific enough, and I corrected the 5 * rating from the author's personality). Overall, I rate creativity as 3 * mainly because of the perspective.The book is written in the first perspective. (a lot of I do this, I do that, I will go there, I feel, I would, I would like) don't like this format.
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I love this book. I am not going to praise it needlessly because not everyone likes the same thing. Just read the free chaps and see for yourself if it's your cup of tea.Important to note: I am updating 2 chaps a day, but I am a full-time writer and I know nothing else aside from this, so money is an important factor, especially right now for me. If the book doesn't get enough support that supports me, I am going to drop it to try another hand (As I am trying multiple books atm, even on another platform, but this book is a priority for now). So if you like the book and want to read it, support it. Thank you, have a good day. :)
I really love the story but the chapter 2 and 3 is a bit confusing to me too so i gave the story development a 4 star rating but I really recommend this to my friends for real!!
A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating.A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeahyou have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for nowlike I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide somethingall the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kidI think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at allit's not perfect English but it's readableso yeah, that are my thoughts about this book
