una buena historia para pasar el rato, con un protagonista bastante realista el lo que cabe en un mundo ficticio en general lo unico molesto es la duracion de los capitulos se siente que son muy cortos y con relleno innecesario pero en general aguantable, recomendado si quieres pasar un buen rato con una historia decente
I really liked it! The characters are lovely, especially the family. The story is descriptive enough and its an overall good ride if you're looking for some modern romance.
English isnt my first language. The novel is pretty good, mc is very interesting. Please dont turn this into harem, many author failed to make a good harem.
what do you people know?keep complaint do you know when the author of this book was 9 years old his one leg was running a business and the other leg was climbing hills to go to school.you people are dumb.compared to the author's achievement the mc is nothing. 8 years old and opened a stall,cook food,earn money absolutely nothing in Chinese standard he is at best average
I don't have a well-formed opinion for the play yet, but I have a general idea of what I might encounter.In general terms what stands out the most is the character design, you can see that they were thought beforehand to make them more realistic but it remains to see the development they have regarding their actions and their ambitions.The writing quality is good, I can understand everything well although sometimes there are small words that could be changed for others, or rewrite sentences, to make the reading more fluid. But you can see the author's commitment to write something with quality. Good job!The world background has not been explained but some things are assumed in iceberg fashion. As the name suggests, "Urban Emperor". You know what might be there.Without further ado I will wait for other chapters to do another review, but I don't go away disappointed with another poor quality new work. It has the potential to be a lot of fun.I just hope for two things:Firstly that there is no nasty NTR towards the protagonist. I'll never understand masochistic horn-loving authors, but to each his own. I'll just leave with a bad taste in my mouth.Long live the Mary Sue MCs who take the beauties!And secondly, may the MC not be a freaking hypocrite. If he's evil let him behave like one. If he's a "nice guy" let him be as such, and even if he's a middle ground. To each his own nature in his actions. But I can't stand the implausible twists of hypocritical protagonists.
author a near 10+years wasting the usage if the phone ?? he can atleast try body tempering technique or search for a method to enhance the farm quality also wasting that much time where many can be done atleast the farm could enhance cultivation speed sell for higher money to get resources search for more cultivation arts to perfect and refine his art more and more making a stronger foundation increaseing his speed you completely created a huge time skip loophole here with no achievement in between except level up sorry but thats unbelievable
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.
the only problem i have with this is that i need more chapters, so far everyhing is lookin good........................................................
So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya?? So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya?? So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya?? So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya?? So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya?? So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya?? So is this a harem?? Is he become the legendary Takuya??
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So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's.
pro
- It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it.
- the action is ok.
con
- the grammar is horrible.
- obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse.
- The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying.
- Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic.
- The system and leveling lacks detail.
- The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening.
- Again things happen just to happen..
I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5
The introduction is so long and it seems I've begun to see many of the references in this Webnovel, a Sci-fi packed Solo Leveling but still maintain the magical nature despite the difficulty of the naming, I hope you would give us a proper naming to the MC.