I can't stop thinking about your book, to the point where it's keeping me hooked all day and night, and i am so excited on what will happen next??I wish i could write like you!?
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
don't have any words to say just wanted to gave it five star . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
never seen a mc more cowardly and useless, even dense jp mc have more backbone...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm enjoying it a lot. I like the idea and the characters, but I can't help but think that he isn't using his resources well. Same thing with the other characters, the Regressors for instance. They have already died 4 times or something like that, but for some reason they seem afraid of pain and are somewhat lazy in my opinion.
I am really enjoying this new book! The MC doesn't have some ridiculous nonsense cheat, that instantly gives him everything he needs or provides plot armour. Rather he has only one advantage (immortality) and has to work hard and take things patiently in order to rise to the top.Story building is good, and the pace is perfect. Not much is currently known about the world, but in a good/mysterious way.However my only issue with this novel is the grammar quality, the names are often spelt differently in the same chapter. It's annoying, and there are some other small grammatical mistakes. A simple proofread would fix this issue! Overall, excellent book and I hope it gets picked!
Great beginning great story a great MC until now the story is really perfect The author did a great job the world buildings is very good and detailed And the Mc is ruthless enough The thing that bothers me a bit is the bloodline thing but I believe the the author will elaborate later on
Such a curious thing this is...The writing is good definitely not reinventing the wheel or anything but compared to other works on here 10/10I actually think the only problem i have with this premise based story is the lack of a centered perspective meaning there is no mc.One last thing we don't know what the story is directly about.Is it how the unveiling of naruto's past will change the future or how naruto will change.
Seriously a wonderful story but hust after 40 chapters the Arthur will stop uploading it and it will remain like this for really long time and no ones knows that the Arthur will ever upload the remaining chapters
Personally for me, the story is meh.The character design is half-hearted, the world background is vague and the power system is mediocre at most.The tone of the novel just didn't click it with me, guess I'm way too serious for this type of novel.For an average reader who just want a novel to kill time with, this one is meh enough.As for the other readers, I guess they read far too many shitty novels that their quality judgement fell down.
Não sei se é permitida a review em outras línguas diferentes da original, porém venho aqui falar o por que você, que fala português, deve ler esta obra. (Tente ler em inglês, não traduza, além de manter a intenção original do autor na tradução, você ainda treina seu inglês, a obra tem uma leitura fácil, leve e imersiva, logo no primeiro capítulo você acaba fascinado com o mundo.)- Protagonista Ingênuo porém não é irritante, acaba gerando uma sensação de leveza que jamais vi antes em uma webnovel;- O autor descreve muito bem o mundo;- Não existem clichês óbvios e jogados na historia a torto e direito;- O desenvolvimento de personagem é incrível, levando em conta que o protagonista é aleijado desde os 7 anos, tendo pouco conhecimento sobre o mundo. A sensação de descobrir os plots que o autor preparou é maravilhosa;
I've read through to chapter 25,and decided to drop it. main reason is that the storyline.. the mc is too overpowered and the world setting is 2d