good novel, needs to be longer. needs to be updated faster. wonder if mc will be taking little one as a lover when she gets older. ??????
The beginning is great until I look at all the chapter titles,description, and what I have read so far and realize there is no merchant actions that would consider him being a merchant, He doesn't sell stuff that would be considered a merchant, All I see is Sex and more *** then cultivation nothing to relate to the Title of the story.
Highly recommend if you're the kind of ***** who will notice that the author hasn't uploaded in months, read it anyways and then feel heartbroken because there are no new chapters and you're already way too invested in the story.
Probably too early to write a review but I will write one for now to be reviewed later. The writing quality is of great quality, the characters are well defined for their roles, the military worldbuilding is nice so far and the updates is perfect. The chapters are long which I personally think is good. The storyline is developing well too but I will wait for more chapters to see better. But, so far, so good. Keep up the good work.
Damn, It was very good prologue. ..
it is very interesting I love how Fu Jui personality in the story. I also like the other characters in the story. The hot and cold relationship was also my favorite part of the story. I am very excited on how the characters unravel the secret and how they will react.
This metalinguistic novel type is awesome, everyone that ever gave a try to writing or any kind of creative job know the difficulties. And this novel cover all of then perfectly, it is great to see that other have the same trouble as me.
The book is very well written. I love the plot, it is very interesting and it makes people want to binge-read it at one go. continue to work hard author.
I like what you have written so far but even more is that you write for yourself, for the story and a personal conviction which turn into an original story. Gj keep it up. I am not giving you a full score because of some issues which started from personal opinion but i don't want to impose as you made yourself crystal clear about it in the description.
Honest reviews are here. This novel is about transmigrated MC into a magical world where he becomes Master Academy in Heaven Academy.. Heaven Academy used to be top Academy in the world.. Unfortunately, this academy had long forgotten by the world, and now, many people only know it as a myth, which results in many people doubting the existence and the truth of the myth about this academy..This Academy have a mystery foundation where everyone who become Master, teacher, or student of the academy will awaken the "system" to assist them in cultivation to grow stronger.. That is why this novel has a title of My System Academy. MC is not the only person who has a system in this novel..This novel has a tag "pretend to be weak" but MC not pretend to be weak, MC is really weak at the start due to he not awaken his talent, magic power, magic root, magic aptitude, magic affinity and magic spell.. MC is given temporary power to pretend his mystery strength to intimidate other people.. MC will eventually become stronger fast with the system help..This novel has the potential to become one of the hidden gems in webnovel, but unfortunately, there are many plot holes in this novel.. Lack of detail, vague explanation, skipping scene, contradict fact, and so on.. The system said that it prioritise the individual personality, but the system sets a minimum bar soooo high standard in magic attitude and magic root.. For example, the company you interesting on are hiring people, and they said they are looking to a good personality people and not highly educated academic results, BUT they also put a minimum condition to apply for their company into "above 3.75 CGPA" only..We can only hope the author grows and gain more experience while writing this novel and make the best novel he ever created later on.. Unfortunately, as you can see, this novel has been abandoned.. Even though you read until the latest chapters, you will just waste your time.. It is obvious that the author has given up on writing.. Well, not everyone has a talent in writing a novel.. The author got a good and creative idea, but he can't make a better story due to lack of experience and expertise guide..
This story is great. It is good because I search and search in Google for pokemon breeding and farming berries related novel the result is one, the only one is this novel that is not even finished and edited. I'll be sad if this novel stop.
Tsk tsk, you must go worship Fang Yuan. If you dare screw him over, you are simply courting death. Good work making use of the unexplained lotus people, my theory is that was Spectral Soul and Red Lotus collaborating in sealing the immortal zombie and not provoking heaven will or just an arrangement.