I like it just the way it is. Only had a minimal error and tge authr is nice we just need a lot of reader so that the author doesnt drop hehehe. Right @DaoOfTheMoon
author, pleasethe novel has a great future, maybe they can even hire the author, I like that it does not advance so fast and explains things well, the esper reference to''toaru majutsu no index''?, I wonder what skill woke up, if your requirement to awaken it was to reach level five of copper's esper range, then the ability must have a huge load for the whole body, if the body is not powerful enough, it will not be able to resist the ability, it would be great if it obtained the ability from ''all for one, of the anime boku no hero academia'', is the ability that the villain has, allows him to steal the skills of others and make them his own, also can combine them to create new attacks, also allows him to grant stolen skills of other people, example: if the MC steals someone's ability, this skill becomes his, but if he wants to give him the ability he stole from another person, he can do it, maybe if the MC wakes up this skill, you could add him to Go back to the skill and change the name, it would not be the same, if the MC woke up this ability, instead of killing those who beat him for not having skill, he can steal them, by doing this, he could make they feel what it is not to have a skill, they literally will descend from heaven to hell, their families will despise them and maybe they will banish them and they will not have anything, besides that with this ability, the MC will be able to steal the enemies' powerful ability, will not have to worry about the repercussions, which can be done by a person without an ability ?, nothing, but a requirement to steal the skill is that first the MC has to defeat them, so that the skill is not too broken, the MC would look for the stronger skills and would be done with them and would be invincible in the future, and immortal, because surely there is a skill that makes you immortal not ?, If it is not haci, can be two, example: a skill gives you life eternal, and another gives you a capacity of super regeneration, this ability allows you to rebuild your whole body up to a drop of blood, but desmora a lot of time (10 years or more ?, of course if you add another skill called super acceleration, you can accelerate this process and only will need a year or less ?, besides that as the MC to said that they live in refuge cities (they are enclosed by the beasts from the outside) he could build his own empire, to do that he would have to be super powerful and intelligent, and have a squad of faithful followers to help him, could find a group of children orphans, these children would see him as their savior and they will always be faithful to him, then he begins to train them, and with his ability, he can give these children skills I steal from other bad people, not so strong (3 stars or more if the limit is 5, maybe the strongest skills are 10 stars? or was it the other way round?), but if the skills are united, they will be extremely strong, then the legend of the invincible squad would begin, where each member has 4 skills (3 that gives them the MC and the original skill of this) the squadron could be from 5 -10 child (s), (better if all the children were women, so that when they grow up they are all wives of the MC, after all an emperor needs an empress and concubines) the MC could steal in the future a skill share or union ?, an unknown use of this skill could be that ..., I better explain it with an example: the MC has the ability of eternal life (a skill of the highest ranks, although it has no offensive power, through training you can be very strong, this process is very slow, a normal person would never live long enough to get the benefits, but if you have eternal life?), have wives, do not want these to die of old age, then with the ability union or share, oo tra (has a maximum of the number of skills you can share, example: 4?), bind your ability to eternal life to one or more people, making all your wives have eternal life as long as the MC is alive and they are faithful to him, because if they leave with another or betray him, the MC withdraws this option and the one that abandoned or betrayed him, begins to age again, the MC builds his mega empire with which he dominates the planet becoming the stronger person of this, with the most powerful skills that I steal, then the story of the novel expands into space and the MC discovers that there is more life in the universe, and in the end the MC becomes the most powerful, capable to create universes, etchas this great thing that I came up with for this novel, no?
Damn! This novel is sooooooo goooood! I can't stop rereading the 3 chapters right now because it's just toooo gooooood! Evryone should be reading this book!
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Hoping that the author could see this. Im truly amazed on how the author used certain rare words here and I enjoyed the story line a bit. Though the chapters are quite not up to date for the most part but I believe if this book were to be given enough time accumulating chapters after chapters, it will surely attain the recognition it deserves. I hope the author wont forget about the system in the near future chapters.
this story is ok. but thats it.the concept is nothing new but still rare enough to be interesting. the execution is meh.10 chapters prologue with some stuff thats relevant, 15 chapters of different pov's that feel like filler. that leaves me with 25 out of the 50 chapters i read with actual mc plot and its bland, the mc is not really memorible. the mc just goes into a dungeon and clears it without trying, he can tame 1000 beasts of c rank and below from the very begining, its boring there is no adventure and no excitement in this adventure story.im actually struggling with the rating for this story. 5 stars is an exceptional story, 4 stars a good story. 3 stars is an ok story, 2 stars not worth wasting your time on and 1 star is trash.this story is not good enough for 3 stars but better then 2 star.so my rating is 2.7 stars.
This is so incredibly bad. To be completely fair, based on the writing level and language, I think the author is a teenager. Good for him or her for deciding to write something and sticking with it, but it's really rough. The dialogue is soulless and every time I read it I can't help but picture an emotionless robot speaking it. The romance aspect is... how can I say this? It's like what a edge loner imagines is cool. One of the MCs names changed to something completely different halfway though for no reason, a couple times other MCs would be referred to as completely different names out of nowhere. Sometimes the author forgets basic things about a character and/or attributes something to one character that applies to another character. For example, one MC has an AI named Noah, and a couple times the author has a different character talking to Noah, even though that character has never met nor do they know Noah exists.It's just really not good. I read all the current chapters because I had a lot of time to kill and frankly because it was like watching a train wreck - I couldn't look away.
The author gives us a stupid idiot soldier and believes that readers will be idiots with IQ5 and will believe him that a SPECIALIST who can operate special equipment is an idiot. There is a character in the story dumb-as,nob,IQ5,naive,childish,aggressive,maniac .The author is an IQ5 idiot to believe that normal readers will believe the nonsense he describes. Rating minus 100 .
Pls update soonT-T!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
Really interesting story and characters. I like the OP MC that has his own concerns. Reminds me of HSSB and My Senior Brother is too Steady. Early days right now but really good so far!
There's another similar one where MC is blind and teaches Animals