I think this is a great novel that i would highly recommend, and feel that rhis book should be notIced more so for that im writing This review
i refuse to read stupid dialogs between the system and the protagonista, there is 2 things i hate the most: Plaina protagonist and system. I could no bare read more than 3 chapters because of this anoying system, It is the most unfunny thing i've seen in a novel till now.
One of best trial read. Already updated in mtl and still enjoying this novel. ....... .. ...........................................................m..mm........
I really loved the start of the book. It's very creative and author did really good job with the world building. Now i don't know what else i should write but if you are new reader then please check it out.
Chapter 10 Status:
Writing Quality: ⭐️ MTL
Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ One chapter a day or so
Story Development: ⭐️⭐️ I am to lazy to write, but it=s worse than those novels in Trial reads
Character Design: ⭐️⭐️ Bland, one dimensional characters with 0 depth or personality
World Background: ⭐️⭐️ Only a little is explained at the start, but it‘s incomplete, disorganized and useless for the most part
It was really not worth the read. It is basically My Wife is a Beautiful CEO, and a poor copy at that. This mc just has different circumstances, being he lost his memories and is a coward and extrenely naive. The story pacing is extremely slow and by the time the author wants you to pay for the chapters there is no improvement or actual plot involved in the story. He is at the same place as he is, same personailty, still not working at the job, no ‘girlfriends’ there’s just no improvement what so ever. I’d recommend you just go read My Wife is a Beautiful CEO or re-read if you’ve already finished it.
It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) .
There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young.
In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!
Writing Quality: Well-written and smooth to read through.
Stability of Updates: Good
Story Development: Interesting premise so far.
Character Design: Great
World background: A modern setting and a game setting, very good.
this is a great story and had amazing character development. my only complaint is it hasn't been updated in 5 months. I am desperate for more chapters
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
What can I say except that is a really fun read and that it only needs faster releases/more chapters for this to rank as one of my most favorite N I ever read
Great novel? The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it?