Did anyone notice after chapter 1549..the translation not very well.. There few word combine n make me hard to understand.. Sometimes i dunno know what the meaning the sentence..
Confusing, it needs ser ious attention
My honor dictates that I give this novel a 1/10Overall I rate it 5/10 but I finished reading at chapter 761 because I can't stand this **** author anymoreSPOILER(Chapter 761)“I can give all of you a chance. As long as all of you reveal the positions of all your other companions, I can let all of you live.”.. Of course, he would not let the other party live. Saying that was just to lure out all of the other companions of the other party.2. I'm writing here myself:At the beginning there is mistreatment of Americans, then the author used foreign invaders to kill almost the entire population of the planet except the Chinese, then he created some conflicts between their invented ancestors and his own, he defeated everyone, but after a while he killed everyone again by the next invaders xddEND SPOILERIn my opinion, the author is overdoing it with insulting the rest of the world, the fact that the Chinese are brainwashed and have to praise their country is something I can understand, but insulting others is simply shooting in the foot and reducing your views and earnings from the novel.No kurwa typowy żółtek, " podbije twój kraj, matkę, siostrę, zabiję ojca a ty masz na kolanach mi dziękować że możesz mi służyć i twój kraj w koncu może uklęknąć przed wielkimi Chinami. Chiny są najstarszą i najwyższą rasą świata"There is an interesting and somewhat sad thing about these Chinese people, not in this novel, but as I write, I will write:When transmigrating to another world, the Chinese usually build something and always mention how good it is that in their previous life they were the lowest workers because now they can do everything.I don't know if they are forced to write it, or because of propaganda, or maybe the worst thing is that they still think this way after many years.
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why you should read this ...
1) The mc is smart and Op ..
2) Mc maintain good relationship with powerful NPC (non-player character)
3) great character development
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One of the Best MMORPG with war strategies and no fillers Novel and great story Thank you Author.
I would like to preface this review by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I would definitely recommend it to someone. I just think there is a minor issue that keep it from earning a five star rating.
The first issue is not one that limits the story from being rated five stars. I have read up to chapter 220 and this issue was a recent occurrence. The author stopped including the main character status page after he leaves the beginner village. I have not seen the main character’s stats or the stats of his summons for at least 30 chapters and it is a little bit frustrating. The status page was the main way that the author showed the main characters progress in the story. But, although it seems that the author is limiting the usage of the status in the soul book, it is not a dealbreaker. I can live with it.
The main issue that I feel limits the story from being five stars is the interaction between the main character, female lead, and slime. Iris, the female lead, is a beast tamer. She has raised a few beasts in the past. Apparently, treating the beast like a child is the best way to raise them because that is what she does.The other reasoning the author gave for the interaction with the slime is that it is family. I understand the justification that the slime is family, not a tool or pet, but that doesn’t mean it has to be treated like a baby. when the slime is kissed on the cheek every single chapter it’s pretty annoying. Also, the slime kisses the characters on the cheek every single chapter. Obviously, I am over exaggerating. But, when reading the story it feels as if that is the case. It got on my nerves a lot when I read the story. I understand that we treat our pets in a similar manner, but it was really cringeworthy when reading. Furthermore, the slime calls the main character papa and the female lead mama which is also very annoying. I’m pretty sure this novel has an R 18 tag, and these interactions make the story seem childish. It was frustrating to read in those moments to say the least.
Overall, as I said in the beginning, I would still recommend this novel. Despite the minor issues, it kept me engaged throughout the story which is not something that happens with a lot of these web novels. I would definitely give it a try and see if you like it!
Another chinese racism story............
This was nice! A beautiful piece and I can’t wait for the continuation, really eager to see it. Beautiful read
This story is super underaited and needs more people to read I love this book so much I don't no why people have given it bad review's I am so addicted to this book that I read it all in one day
Its a good read, just that you need a content editor. The text needs to be refined. But keep it up. I love system based novels. Write more and I'll support.
To be honest ill be rating this work for various reasons . The first being that this is the Author's first book and yet the story is solid and i didn't find any loopholes till now.
The english is decent and not many grammar mistakes exist which really shows how much thought and hard work the author is putting into this novel and he doesnt even have an editor and he isnt even contracted yet.
The last point is that this story isnt predictable at all .
Keep up the good work and ill be following this work when it gets more chapters.