A good VR game novel. MC wasn't OP from the start, but I can see him become one. There's also some mystery. Author's writing is also improving gradually. I don't know if much of the concept in unique or not, but I am seeing some of them for the first time. And its really good. That's all for now.PS: Can't comment on FL as they haven't played much part till the latest chap yet.To Author: If you are gonna do harem, don't include more than 3 girls. Thank you.
Amazing I recommend it ............................................................
An Anime based novel is to kill for, got me engross from the start wow ? especially with the part of the chemical plant exploding ? poor hiro I hope his parents survives this ?
Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.
I can't get enough of your words, and the writing style! Your way of writing thriller keeps the readers on the edge, and I love how well you have expressed the characters! Keep up the great work!
I love this kind of trope! No more words for me to say and it's a great novel!No issues about grammar and stuff. Keep up on writing, author! ^_^P.S. I put this on my lib to read it later on! ^_^
There is a lot of mystery in this book and from chapter 1, it gets you intrigued that you just want to find more of the story. There is room for improvement overall but the story is nice. Looking forward to more.
Can Someone give raw link please.........................................................
It was actually quite enjoyable until chapter 171. From then on the translation quality droped from standard English to garbage machine translator. I will not give more than 1 Star until the translation is fixed
We all can agree that this novel is inspired from One Piece and that is what made this novel so interesting and fun to read. Expect that this would be the same as thinking if luffy have a system. So without a further ado, i will now start my review.Writing Quality: Superb... the author already have years worth of writing experience. If he has grammar mistakes, then it would mean that he didn't improve. So, you can expect to read a novel with little to no grammar mistakes.Story Development: Can already be guessed just from reading the synopsis. Think of it as luffy with a system but his parents were killed. But I gotta say, mc's past is same as Naruto.Character Design: Since author already have experience, he didn't make the mistake of making his characters like cardboards or one dimensional characters.Updating Stability: Author updates daily so expect that he can satiate your thirst for reading.World Background: 30% Land and 70% Water. What else did you expect?Overall: A must read. Author didn't info dump so it is an interesting and entertaining reading experience. But nothing is perfect so I wouldn't dare to give a five star review.
When will you be continuing this story it looks very good and I don’t want to read a story that stops midway so if you could please respond to this asap
Is there a system out there that genuinely doesn't want to low-key kill protagonists? I mean, all of them (mission-type systems) like to send MCs on dangerous missions that are sometimes even impossible to achieve if it wasn't for the plot armour, which is a saving grace for them. Trust me, if plot armour didn't exist, most protagonists would be killed by systems before even an enemy appears.