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I completely agree with this. From chapter 470-710 (the latest chapter at the time of posting) have been the biggest waste of time in my life. Basically nothing has happened that could have been explained in a paragraph and the author did indeed write a full chapter and a half of explicit sex which has never occurred in the novel beforehand. There has been no depth, no story or power progression in 250 chapter when previously in the novel much much more would have happened. I was very much enjoying the novel up until this point and now I just want to give up.
I don't like how every woman character that they introduce will get the tattoo eventually, this really bugs me that this guy just wifes every girl that has a name.
This is a nice novel, a relaxing and kind of interesting read. Great sm*t too, the only thing I have against it is that the author only has long term memory, in the sense that during the sm*t the mc will be doing a girl in a certain position, and suddenly he’s doing something completely different without any explanation, or the author writes him having an *rg*sm, and then writes it again in the next paragraph like he forgot. It’s kind of difficult to explain, and not that relevant, but it’s just a little thing that irks me slightly.
Please, please, please update!!!!
I have been checking in everyday with hopes of getting to read a new chapter.
Atleast give me just 1 a week, I will be happy!!
Pronouns are a really big deal in English. I honestly can't tell who is narrating this story, it is very confusing.
Tian Shu's Summary for Dummies
1. Tons of Cute and Funny Comedy Scenes. (Leblaine is really funny and cute when she tries to mingle with her stubborn brothers and father.)
2. Tear-jerking Drama. (Does not only give you laughs but also tears ?.)
3. Short Read. (Casually finished in 3 days)
4. Great Plot and Perfect Ending! (It kept my interest high as I slowly read, learning more about her regressions, her family, the people, and the world. Read line by line till I unexpectedly reached the ending )
5. Its as good as Lucia. (Its like Lucia but replace the sm*t with wholesome family bonding and comedy. Though Lucia wins in terms of drama, but this also holds its own)
6. Baby Talks! (IMPORTANT ESSENCE!)
7. Magic and Divine Setting (Its a magical world but doesn't really dwell on other magical creatures like elves or goblins)
8. Good Romance! (But you have to face 3 Demons and 1 Raksha ?)
9. MTL Poetry (Only at the beginning, gets better after 20-30 chapters)
10. MUST READ!
Trash. Story, mc, system and the author. All trash. Don’t waste your time. Brainless and an actual lowlife pervert mc.
five chapters are missing ... 234 is already published
It was good story, and I love the end.
Yes its a good novel
I love the story , please update more ?????
very amazing and interesting novel
keep up
