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I had to drop this novel around chapter 66. Up until that point in the novel, I had some minor complaints with the overall story but once Li Fei was introduced into the story, the MC's personality took a complete 180 and I could not stand it anymore. I do not know if the novel and/ or MC improves in the future but if it is 4000 chapters of what I've read thus far, count me out.
Can someone give the raws for this it would be really great if you can
I wish Yu rin becomes he's girlfriend. unlike that cheeky brat yu sae jung
The narrative is solid, but one aspect that doesn't sit well with me is how noticeable the plot armor is, especially when the protagonist, despite not being inherently powerful, seems to escape unscathed. It's particularly evident when her partner, who possesses remarkable strength, effortlessly dispatches all foes with a single hit. This creates a discernible reliance on plot armor that feels a bit too apparent for my liking.
I like the character development and the world building in this story. It’s one of the top I have read here. Would recommend for those that like fantasy type stories.
I didn't expect that I would like it but I actually did, the story was very entertaining. I really recommend this novel.
update or be a gay......................
eww~ depicts the characters of Chinese people, they oppressed and threatened their own people to get what they want, yuck~ so this how Chinese government acts, shame on you. A bunch of old men tricking a seventeen year old boy to get the inventions he hold? After I read this my impression of china has go down to drain, boooo!!!
This will be fantastic, munya. On a serious note I am extremely excited for this novel, munya. I expect great thing DPA, great things, munya.
I think this is an amazing story. The world background is amazing. The character development is slow and steady and the original character design is really good too. There's almost no grammar mistakes so it's pretty easy to read. [Also, Jeff deserves a chance-]
This is the Xianxia novel I've waited for. It has some cliche situation here (which novel didn't have it?) but the author executes it well. The MC of this novel is even trying to beat the cliche by using his novel reading experience when he was on Earth. :D it's funny.I give writing quality 4 stars because there are some grammatical errors (it's not affecting my reading experience so far but I'll put it here in case some grammar police are dissatisfied with me.) and the narration is slightly too much which we know some readers don't like information. They just want action and skip time only.Wish the author the best and please don't drop this.
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