This novel is not bad for now and i quite enjoying reading it and i think this will be well-known in the future. I recommended to all new in this Qidian that just try read this novel.
writing quality could use some upgrades, for example the characters names have some typos to them. not only that but the grammars could use some help for example am -> I'm some sentences need to be rewritten again. the story development is good, i can't say more because it'll become spoilers for otherscharacter design is okthe updates hmmmm are not great but not terrible eitherworld background..... this is FGO the world is already complex as it isfyi i wrote this after I've read chap 11ps. Buggy pulled a fast one on me, can't believe he became one of the yonkos
Well written ,but i found the tittle little unappropriate ,though he's a Scientist back then in his past life he doesn't manage to show he's knowledge , What i mean is He only depends on the system
really good, mostly because of the WWI vibes with a cool combat system.
At the beginning the grammar is pretty bad but the author get an editor and it gets a bit better some of the mythology is not entirely correct but it's also a fiction story so who gives a f*** all in all though I really like it; I started 3 days ago with there being 251 chapters and finish waiting for more.???????????????????????
Writing quality = 3Story = 3Characters = 3Final classification = 3.6- There are many times that the author makes many lines to describe the scenario, which makes the story unnecessarily long.- Social interaction between the characters is grade 4, because in many chapters the conversations become artificial.- There are some inconsistencies such as, for example, killing a guard at the city gate in broad daylight and no one noticing.
Good story.. but the update for the latest chapter takes too long. ................ i think it will be much better if one chapter a day. If possible . Thanks.
Loved it. ... ... ...
please more chapters
This book is really good can’t wait until new chapters are updated
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great story