Moonlightsword
I am new , and here is my first novel please support me guys ??
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I love doing these kinds of stories. It's like a horror movie where you watch a character and try to immerse yourself in their sorry situation, except it's a person from the real world in the world of naruto. It's a great story and I can't wait to finish it!!!!
Very interesting. Still reading more.
Utterly disappointed with this. It was very interesting at first but became so boring after. The story is everywhere. Its like so many things are happening and the plot has gone far from the original. So many new families, so many conspiracies, another betrayal, blackmailing. Its like everything started to run its due course when YJ returned to her family that everyone started moving and all past mysteries are resurfacing. Its like everyone has been idle until she returned which is stupid. They have introduced so many new characters in 5 chapters that i totally don’t remember any of it. Even their back stories. And when i dont recall, it only mean one thing, that the story id mediocre at best as it did not leave an imprint. Im dropping this. Its such a waste of time. A novel wasted bec of the messy, unorganized plot.
I think it is a good book give it a read
This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
It's nice with great potential so keep it up
a little advice if you are looking for a finished or ongoing story you aint gonna find that here its been dropped by the author.
Uh, cultivation in its literal meaning is to strive for your ideal self and real life cultivation exists. Internal alchemy it's called. You goal is to create golden pallet, also known as golden core. There is yuanying/nascent soul level manual in one sect but that sect is small and just a sect that branched off from qianzhen sect.
Luca is by far the best side character.
This book is amazing! the character growth was awesome! Didn't quite understand the Love for Lenox at the beginning, but by the end, love him!
That was a great story!!! Kept my interests up the whole time. Couldn’t wait to see what happened next!! Literally couldn’t put it down. Thank you author!
