so I don't normally do reviews or leave comments but this book so far has me hooked. I really enjoy how the author does the reincarnation and doesn't make the mc super op right out the gate. Can tell that mc will be op as story progresses and that there could be a few love interests in the future. really looking forward to how this story progresses, keep up the good work
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The first few chapters were really good till the translator decided to feel his smart by using MTL. if Webnovel really cared they would have fired such translators but what can you expect from Chinese that care more about quantity than quality.
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First off, I wanna say that the grammar is good! There are some misses here and there but they don't really affect reading experience.Now for the story. I quite like the slow burn romance on this one. The MC and the FL are well defined imo. Sure this might be kinda slow to some but I like the pacing very much.Finally, I just want to laugh at the people complaining that the MC is a wimp. It makes sense that someone'll be disoriented if they suddenly get placed in an environment they're not used to. Plus at the later chapters, after he fully acclimatized to his new environment, well let's just say that the Princess isn't teasing him anymore, or can't rather :)Overall, good stuff
The story has a lot of potential, but it is wasted in a easily evitable way.The most common problems are:- LOL.- The author explain as something work just to forget it and making it work in a different way.- Irrealistic or dumb plot device (alert minor spoiler, jump to the next point if you don’t want know: an explosion that erase 75 square km of the city where the mc is, but he says he doesn't know anything because he didn't watch the news and he was at a friend house, friend that previously he said was in the same city. To not add that even though the explosion happened in a residential district there were just 67 deaths).- Expression used in the wrong way.Although I may sound harsh (both here and in the comments) I don't want to offend the author, but just point out thing that in a much needed rewrite should be corrected.As said before the novel has a lot of potential and it sadden and annoy me to see it wasted.I hope to not have offended or upset the author with this review or my other comments.
OMG the cover is so cute! From Miao miaomiao to Miao Xiaomao, I think I'm seeing a good pattern here <3 Munya!....140140140140140140140140
So, this novel is under serious editing and rewriting. A new batch of chapters will be uploaded starting from this Friday.I sincerely hope you stick around to read the new ones. Thanks.
Like this mc??????????????????????????????????????
If you were given a chance to go back in time, what moment of your life would you choose to go back to? Why would you want to go back to that moment?"
Ahhh... seriously I am apalled at the fact that this hidden piece of gem has been evading my awareness for more than a year! I'm currently at chapter 74 and so far it has been an amazing story! I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out later