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Story is great fun, and the fantastic struggles of ANThony are detailed herein. The few side POVs really help to flush out the world building and provide context for the story environment.
Cool story I like it u guys should definitely read it is worth your time so enjoy and I love the font style the story just everything overall
Its medicore.Mc iritate me so much ...Autor make him look weak. And he was.. but all the time he lose battle and when he was about to die his hiden power destroy enemy.... And his charakter...He was bullied and when he got magic he new guy he forget past and accept everything like normal magic ok new guys ok mehhh....He complett another person..
With the author back I decided to give a review (though I'm not very good at them)I have been very excited to see where this story will go, the first five chapters had me hooked and I've kept an eye out for any updates, the new chapters where definitely worth the waitI hope to see more soon
Its quite good for me, but please release more.You took too long or much time to release and i think its bad which make people also bored and too lazy to read or remember your novel. Even i already forget that i subscript this novel if there's no update.Hope you can bemore active to release this story.
Simple yet engaging to many readers (especially otakus, hey there! ??).. As a reader who is an otaku, it actually suits my tastes. I hope in the next chapter it would be in a third person's view so that it wouldn't be too confusing for some readers. Because the more you keep on shifting each character's POVs, some would tend to lose interest because it is quite confusing. I hope that you could add up some more spice with the world background. I hope this review isnt too offensive... ?? I am just giving a few suggestions. I really like the story so I just hope that you would reconsider if ever :)If you want it first POV, please do use some more sensual words to let people imagine what kind of world you are putting your character into.... Thats all thank you! I hope you dont find this review offensive ?
Well can't say a lot since it has only a few charapter now, so my review probably isn't very accurate. However from what I've seen so far there could have some better word choices and the writing is a little ******* (not that I'm one to say, my English is also ****). It has promissing story, if the author does well, the chapters are little short but overall it's pretty good.
The setting is detailed and interesting and the story is also well written. The main issue I see is with paragraphing with some of the longer paragraphs just needing to be split up.
Why did you stop writing?.........................................................................................................................It was such an interesting concept. I hope you start writing again.
Dang this is a great book...ver well written...i found this late and i can't stop reading it.. thanks author thanks author thanks author thanks author
I think this book is from RRL correct me if im wrong i used to read this exact setting overthere same author?