Writing Quality: Can’t really find anything that is unreadable or annoying just some minor mistakes every 50chps Update stability: 2 Chps a day can’t get much better than thatStory development: has kept me intrigued and interested as of ch236 and planing constantly reading furtherCharcter Design: feels a little basic but the whole point is it’s supposed to be like a Chinese novel so it makes sense World Background: extremly good probably the best part of this novel the author has made a great foundation for further exploration. Overall: great book, good read hope to see further development and progress.
Hey, the author here doing a review! Hope you enjoy the story and if you feel the need to share it around to others you could try to hit it with one of those power stones... Anyway, I need to get back to writing. Hope you all get some good reading done. :D
Translation Quality: Terrible, feels like an edited machine translation.Stability of Updates: New novel.Story Development: Slow paced chapters with padding, cliche.Character Design: Flat characters, main character has cliche personality.World Background: It's Earth, somehow in USA.
Hi guys, this author review is around chapter 190 and I would like to say a few things.1. A big THANK YOU to all of my readers, and for all of you who are rooting after Elliot, Jennifer, Jessica, Jessica, Wu Kong and Jules! I have a ton more surprises in store, it'll be a great ride ahead!*spoiler ahead*2. To all my potential readers/supporters. All of the characters around the MC will be pretty strong, so don't worry too much about him having "baggage". 3. His two sisters are going to be epic down the line, so don't worry about that either.4. There are races in this novel, but it will mostly deal with the beast system in the beginning. So don't expect to read about racing until around chapter 80.5. My discord server has pictures and inspirations in it so you can have a richer reading experience. Do consider joining it! :DOverall, I think this is a fun LIGHT novel to read. I apologize if there are slight mistakes and slight plotholes, I am very open to questions and discussion, so feel free to drop your comments! Do try to give this novel a chance if you're thinking of reading it. Thank you!! :D
The major flaw of this novel is the MC.It is almost like there are two different people living inside him. The Master and the Child.The Master is calm and composed, remembers the life and experience of the alchemy emperor and is generally well adjusted.The Child appears every time the author needs to show just how awesome the MC or his Chinese heritage is. I really don't get why glorifying yourself and your country is such a big deal. The child is also a attention seeker. But, a split personality is not really a no go for a novel. The trouble starts when the Child does stupid things that only serve to delay the progress of the story as well as causing troubles for the Master to solve.In one moment the MC is composed and knows when to act, but in the next he seeks trouble everywhere.But don't take my word for it. Let me give you an example.MC needs to take a basic alchemy exam to be able to rent a furnace. It is a 24h available online only exam.What the MC needs to do is get it done. What he does is take the maximum number of available exams in one go.There is literally no benefit, as far as we and the MC at that point in time know, to taking more exams. But the child seeks attention.At school the avarage grade MC shows of knowledge about seals he should not know, but because of his lucky chance he is now a native speaker of the otherworldly language. As a result he gains scrutiny by his teacher and classmates, a rival who will continue to antagonize him and a possible one sided love interest. There is no benefit to standing out, no grades no additional resources. He literally does it to show off and embrace the class monitor (antagonist).The MC lack of common sense, the stupid attention seeking and his desperate pleas for other to notice his unusual increases in strength do not fit his background as a hard working poor student who is used to being disadvantaged.Anyone who has been overlooked and disadvantaged by the extended family and the public at large will gain at least a little bit of maturity and a sense of caution. Not to mention his father shows how to keep quiet while working towards a better future.Even the younger sister shows a very mature attitude. An attention seeker would have never had a good relationship with a disabled sibling who by default would have needed much more care and attention.All of this before the MC gained centuries of experience and knowledge.The idea and framework of the novel are wasted by the author because he desperately tries to increase word count by creating useless conflicts while regularly destroying his own characterization of the MC.
The story is really very interesting since the character will have to see them as a woman in addition to not knowing anything about cultivation, the way the events unfold makes you want to keep reading since it turns out to be entertaining. The personalities of the people of the cultivation world are very well represented; I like the interactions since they are fluid.Well I suppose that the protagonist will have to accept who he is XD. I would advise other readers to read this novel.PS: The way you narrate is fine. You are on the right track as a writer!
Awesome bro. This story match someone's real life incidents. ??????. Keep going bro. One day you will be a professional writer ? ? ?I hope you will
I found this novel by chance when looking for something new to read. And all I can say is that I love it so far. It's very interesting and can't wait for more chapters to come along. Keep up the great work!
I would think this was based off a manga if I didn’t know this was a webnovel.Loved this, I had a slight problem of reading it though. This whole story so far is very and I mean heavily inspired, that I thought it was a webnovel that it got adapted too if I was none the wiser.The manga I am talking about isIs My Reality a Love Game??
First of all you have an awesome vocabulary and very different writing style. The plot itself is very different which caught my interest from the very first chapter and I love the attitude of the main character.
Overall it's a great start but MCs emotional development is not upto the standard.I hope this story has harem content.Try not to drop the story,because it has a nice plot.
Not so good. The story is rushed .I feels like the author was just writing using templates with the aim of making some quick cash. Don't waste your time with this one.