"No one blames you for that, Ichigo," Kisuke said as he turned to look at Ichigo. "You are still young so mistakes are expected to be made all you can do is learn from them," he said very sagely.
Here other similar that I read some time agohttps://***.fanfiction.net/s/13016759/1/Lion-of-the-WestPraying see you continue this fanfic too, either directly or rewrittenAnyway, I recommend to explain with more detail, how was the encounter of your MC with Naruko, how did they find characters from other universes and convince them to join them, etc
They wanted the moment to last forever, but when Toya sensed that his beloved had grown weak as she had melted completly in the kiss, he realized that they needed to pull away. Reluctantly they pulled apart, the silent room echoed with the deep rithmical breaths of the two, that now were desperately seeking air.
They met up with the sight of a dying broken boy, surrounded by his dead loved ones. Silently, they bagged the dead, and put the boy in pain to sleep so he wouldn't fight what they would do.
But after na maalis ni Bea ang tingin kay Cody, si Cody naman tong titingin kay Bea at tititigan ang dalaga habang nagpeprepare ng coffee. At halata niya na parang gloomy si Bea and he knew that he was actually the reason behind that sadness. Those half closed eyes saka dejected eyes na tila ba nabagsakan ng sandosenang labahin.
jazz: Hearing this he stopped sobbing he looked at her mother and the girls Marie and Hancock eyes are slightly red, they must have cried as well. " Hancock can you dress up my mom. We have to get out of this place before a Admiral came. "
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Xiulan's angry eyes flinched. She can't believe he's threatening her with her father's company. "Drats! Such a foul play!" Xiulan secretly cursed. She can't help but be disgusted by Hongqi's way of scaring her.
Xiulan thankfully smiled at Dong Yong. "Thank you so much." Xiulan wrote on the paper. "I promise to you we will save your family." She quickly added.
"Whatever..."
"Alright dismissed, I want to see this done in the coming weeks."
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