Just a fair warning the author has a major NTR fetish.What was once an engaging second-chance, slice-of-life sports novel—focusing on the protagonist's growth both as a footballer and as a person, experiences he never had in his first life—has now devolved into a story driven by cheap drama. The second-chance theme feels redundant, the slice-of-life moments are bleak, and the sport itself has taken a backseat, now serving almost as filler.The girl he starts dating in chapter 39 NTR's him roughly 300 chapters later.We find out the MC is pure rubbish in bed and that the girlfriend even joins the roommate with two prostitutes/random girls... And whats our MC doing during all this? Probably spending his evenings staring at a blank wall for all we know.Even after everything transpires, the roommate and ex-girlfriend face zero repercussions for their actions and are actually rewarded for being terrible people.1) Does he or she get an STD considering he's been sleeping with multiple girls every night? - No. 2) Does she get outed for cheating on her Boyfriend? No. 3) Does the roommate end the relationship after he had finished cucking the MC? - No.4) Are there any repercussions for sleeping together behind his back for months? - NoIn summary, they start dating and live happily ever after, whilst the MC is forced out of the club because the author has to rely on cheap drama to progress the plot whilst overshadowing the actual story.
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So far I really like this novel. I think it has a great potential. I am really looking forward to its future. I hope the writer would be sensible enough not to make the readers waiting for new chapters.
This should also have a powerful cultivation technique. Other than that the mc should also have some other buff in cultivation and other related stuff. The hero should also have some be there strong in combat Techniques. And also please don't fully over exaggerated this novel that much. This novel should also multiple world like lower world, medium world and large world. immortal realms should also be mentioned. Their should also be powerful element's such space, time and choas
i have read the raws for this the character of the mc is very inconsistent at the start he is cold blooded ,selfish ,profit seeker and smart. as time goes by you can see him turning dumb and then at 100 plus ch he just randomly offends everyone.side charecters are stupid. Enemies are all brainwashed and crazy with no logic or reasoning whatsoever. Overall great concept ruined by idiotic characters.
First few chapters are a bit slow but after chapter 4 it picks up the pace. my only complaint with the system is with the skill levels(1-10 was beginner then it became elementary but continued to level 11 , personally i think it should have just started over as elementary level 1) but other than that it’s a really good novel.
I don't care what others think. I liked the story. The one redeeming thing about the check-in mechanic is that MCs tend to be careful as they build power. That's fine and added to some decent fire-based powers it's an interesting enough story.
You have an amazing talent in writing! I couldn't stop myself from getting excited at whatever comes next. There's this mysterious but beautiful depth in your story that makes a reader like me unable to stop reading.Will i recommend this? OF COURSE! and I even added it to my library :>More power to you!
I love the story overall. I find that I'm now checking daily for updates, compared to some of the other novels I'm also reading. The story keeps me intrigued and suspended about the next crazy idea the MC will do or joke around with his distinct sense of humor. Love the work.
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