Okay, so I tried to read it and couldn't.I just couldn't!I couldn't read it with the messy monologue that doesn't seem to make sense. I'm not complaining about it. The author's already said that's his style, and his jokes might be good, but for me this is just not a proper story.However if you're reading this review then you must first try this novel to check whether it suits you. This novel style wasn't for me, but it might be for you!
Its fine. Then it turned into a replay of Naruto. I think it may have been better if it were more than just Inochi and 3rd Hokage glancing at soneones menories and reactions.
I really like This story just because of the Mc and the actions in this but I will say that the grammer definitely isn’t the greatest but I really don’t mind and just enjoy reading this novel and depending on who you are you may or may not see the characters as 2d but honestly I enjoy this novel beavuse I think that the premise is pretty good and I like how the story is going so a 5/5 for me personally?
Good luck , keep it up with the good work nana , always a pleasure to read another story of yours , still you need to focuse on some writing improvements , overall , all good :3
Complimentary first review from the Author:The story is set in a world where magic exists, and each Magical Element has a Holy Church, with the Holy Church of Light being the most influential and strongest. The only element which doesn't have a Sacred Church is the Element of Darkness as it was destroyed, being thought to be the work of the Devil. Since then, all Dark Mages were hunted by the world and killed whenever discovered.In this world, Gabriel wakes up with the Holy Element of Light, but due to circumstances, he wakes up with a second Element, Darkness which brings him at an unexpected crossroads. The story will be an epic filled with mystery, adventure and actions.Please give it a try.
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Started of really good but quickly turned extremely bad. In the beginning the novel was going in a good direction. He lives alone is a weeb and seems to know what he's doing. Nothing wrong with that but then the system forces him to go out and explore the real worldIn first chapters it was fine. He just walked around and visited famous places to get special talents from them. We also quickly learned that the supernatural existed in the real world and then the author suddenly decides to focus more on the real world than the Mc's simulations.While traveling the Mc encounters something supernatural he needs to start fighting it and shortly after his fight the government finds out about his powers. And as in all Chinese novels the Mc quickly becomes slave to the government.But if I go back to the simulations. The simulations themselves are pretty good but the Mc's reactions aren't. He holds grudges against people for what they did inside the simulations. He also becomes more stupid with time but the author tries to make him seem smart.If that isn't enough to make you read it then you should know that he doesn't actually transmigrate even after 200 chapters. In conclusion I would not recommend this novel to anyone.
I suggest readers to read the first three chapters before judging it.Writing Quality: Author have improved it from his previous experience of writing his other novels. So expect the novel to have few or no grammar mistakes.Story Development: Plot is that of a system user with a virus system that is similar to the game known as plague inc. But this isn't a fanfic of plague inc and is an original novel.Character Design: MC is merciless which is fitting of his identity as a terrorist. Don't have many comments about this.Updating Stability: Author has consistent updates. Although the author doesn't update daily, expect at least an update every week. The author isn't getting paid for this so don't demand him to update everyday.World Background: A cultivation world with chinese origin from the past era. Fitting of the cultivation setting so nothing to comment about this other than author did well by not info dumping the world background.Overall: A must read for those who are finding system novels with a unique system.
The only reason I am reviewing is because webnovel has yet to pick this book up over the generic garbage Monster Transmuter. I have only read 60 chapters but that much is enough to assure one that the author actually gave a lot of thought before writing and not simply throws the cliches at the readers.The mc is very likable and stands out from the generic cold blooded rebirth mc. The other characters have been yet to be fully fleshed out but they are intriguing until now. The plot is clever and has plenty of humour. Since the mc is very thorough in his actions, the plot armour doesn't have to save the day everytime. World background till now is honestly not something top notch especially for a non Chinese reader but well this has only started. Please contribute to this novel and push it to the voting zone. I don't want to take the dark path for this novel (yet).
We have a main character with a decent personality, an adorable female lead, and minor characters that have their own character developments. There are no annoying characters that simply live to advance the plot or provoke the MC. The fact that the MC is not blindly arrogant or petty is also a plus. It is set in a cultivation world, and has a heartwarming and leisure vibe. He's living with his lazy master and pampering her in various ways to earn currency for his cheat, stunning her and other characters with his max level skills derived from the system. The characters have their own unique personalities so their interactions are satisfying to read.It's brilliant and enjoyable.
This is some dope ass story with a crazy maniac mc and the plot is crazy and unique form others..You will love the story and its progress is way good than some top novels.Grammer may concern you sometimes, but for a reason it would not bother you much.The progress makes you addicted to this ****..Not for kids who loves kind mc, hates killing, help everyone and sacrifice everytime and ****.. Give it a try and you wont regret this ****(warning not for weak hearts).
The flow of the story is smooth so far. The author has put lots of effort into the story while trying to make the concept clear. I liked the synopsis- It is very clear and describe the story in short! Just a few errors which could be corrected during editing! so far, well-done author!Happy writing!