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The story is still in the beginning stages but it has a very interesting theme. The MC is interested in dragons and I can't wait to see where that obsession will take him. Let's hope the first Dragon Tamer sees the dragon soon
Look for an author who wouldn't rate his book five stars ?. You might be confused about the world background but it's just a normal world... nope, a world where The Chronal Disruption has taken place!
I've read your other work it's not bad but if I had to choose I prefer this book it's humor is on point and your Grammer is to notch bravo bro?
A well-written story, one that manages to get me somewhat excited to read even if I have no idea about half of the sports terms. There's good potential here and I'd like to see a bit more of how the pressure to perform can bring out other traumas, especially since the MC is carrying some pretty significant traumatic events.A small primer on relevant football terms would be helpful, something at the beginning I could reference back to.
Definitely a good read for monster summoner fans only wish there was more to read all in all I'm a huge fan now so if you arent sure definitely give it a shot.
Wow, i really love it and also the writing style, I'm in chapter 5 and can't wait to see what unfolds when Eleanor meets the Alpha.
me gusta , pero es muy cliché, no es algo malo pero el protagonista toma aveces unas decisiones que son muy convenientes o la historia en general se siente muy convenientes, y que siendo una habilidad sss tenga tantas limitaciones, siempre en todos las novelas de sss talent, siempre le ponen un montón de limitaciones y llega a parecer incluso peor que una habilidad s o menos, las limitaciones actuales están bien mientras el autor no ponga nuevas más adelante solo porque si.
came from discord to check this out, and not bad. ill follow this one and see where it leads. (word requirements are a nuisance on mankind...)
I’m sorry, ot seems like a great book but no one, and I mean NO ONE, is that dense or stupid. It just completely lost me. I get trying to create a story but it really just feels forced.
Every chapter gets so much more exciting, definitely wrapped in Andre! ???
Masterpiece in its own right—read it, and you'll absolutely love it.
DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters.Oh boy. This novel is absolutely horrendous.To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying, ‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’ for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway? Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it. And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking.Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help.And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader.I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.
