DineshChavan7180
I read this book up to chapter 37 and dropped it. I can no longer tolerate the fact that villains always manage to escape at the last moment. Also the reason that I dropped this book is the nerf mc in chapter 25
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Really looking forward to this one being released, Im tired of all those global online, I am stuff, and all the copy paste novels that wn has been putting in.
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I'm having a really hard time to tell if this is bad or good here's what I have to say I like the starting point of the MC its original for the starting point and the system isn't to overpower to start off I also like that he's introducing modern things for trade eventually here's what I don't like story reads a little more like a military log with some Flair it does not have much character development it's more of MC goes to point A dose things then goes to point B does things sometimes goes back to point A there's our only real three instances that I can think of that have some character development but for the most part it doesn't exploring characters including the MC I think it would be a very good story if it got Rewritten a little and started to explore and go in depth of the characters and make you invest in them
Need more story like this, no system, no magic, no fantasy world that I cant imagine, no strange country name, just alternate story of 18th century europe
This story has no flow or plot. It’s essentially the author going, what should I do next? Then doing it, no matter if it makes sense in the story or leaves a massive plot hole
This is one of my favorite novels. The MC is not only OP, he’s OP in a way we rarely see where every fight seems like a struggle to some degree. Not only, that, he’s hilarious in every way. The only issue I’ve ever had with this book is the worldbuilding, and that’s not even because of the author’s fault. Are some of the gaps in knowledge because he didn’t tell us? Yes. Do they exist because he didn’t feel like filling them in? Also probably yes. However, there isn’t a single gap in knowledge that he didn’t acknowledge and set up for the future. Unfortunately, it appears like this gem has been dropped, but while it lasted it was one of the best novels I know of. This novel was one of the first that I read, and it has remained at or near the top of my list since I first found it. All of this author’s novels are great as well, but this one in particular is amazing.
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A great addition to your library / reading list after only five chapters I'm hooked and can't wait for more ! The author is very dependable when it comes to updates on his novel's , so from the author of Affinity:chaos check out his latest fantasy novel Lunar:Secret Gaudians
is this going to be the next apocalypse meltdown. why no more updates is it dropped. why would you drop such a popular novel . why nomore updates!!!!!!!!
