Wow super great novel love everything about this novel cant wait for more chapters ..................................................................................
This story's premise is intriguing, and the author's imaginative world-building is commendable. While there are areas that could benefit from refinement, such as character development and pacing, the novel shows significant promise. I can advice people who wants a taste of something a little different to read this
Great book. :)
Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
I will try to provide a review of my book“First of all, what is this book about?” about a fantasy world with several emblems of the future, where at that time humans were very adapted to magic, but they were forced again by the outer gods so that there was a lot of bloodshed within the Abyssal Gate, and made the outer gods happy. “Wein was too overpowered at the beginning of the story.” You must think that Wein is too overpowered, right? (Contains Spoilers.) Actually, in a world without borders, and this endless adventure makes him look weak to every opponent, he is not overpowered at the start, because there are also several people who are stronger than him in the Academy. “Will there be romance.” of course yes, but slowly. "Is it a harem?" Wein was approached by many beautiful women, but that didn't make him waver, because there would only be one person who had a romantic relationship with Wein. “How often do you update?” I will update once a day, but sometimes I will update late because I am busy, but I will try to keep uploading, and I will continue to learn to write well for the future.
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It's really incredible, just 4 chapters in and I liked it a lot, although the prologue needs improvement.
The premise is cliché but the execution is really well done and the writing is entertaining. Though, it is repeatitive and over descriptitve ag times, the writing is still engaging. Here are the pros and cons:Pros: 1) Characters: I like how all the characters are grey. They are not particularly likeable but they are not horrid either and thankfully, there is no shallow cat fights. Most characters are clever, even the corrupt and wicked ones are challenging.2) Exceptional female characters: What made me truly appreciate the novel was the female characters. Whether Belinda, Elena, Rozalin, Vanessa, Amelia or Wendy, every female characters has such an outstanding personality. Not all are warriors or mana weilders but they are exceptionally strong in their own way. I am especially fond of Amelia. Though she is an antagonist, the fact that how clever & unpredictable she is, makes her a very strong villain. I am so looking forward to her confrontation with protagonist.3) Plot line: I have to admit the story is more complex than I first thought. Since it was a cliché story of reincarnation, I thought it would be the same old OP character fighting their way to get everything by force like some bloodthirsty battle hungry ghost. However, the plot is much more intricate. The complex web of events and the way they are unraveling is particularly enjoyable. I like the way the ML is cleverly using the corrupt characters and the powerful to his advantage.4) Action sequence & war strategies: The author really knows how to make the war look interesting. I have never read a battle sequence which has invested me this much. I am always curious to know the strategies the ML will use and how it will benefit the battle to their favor.Cons:There is nothing bad per say but one thing has particularly bothered me. That is the glorification of slavery and overworking. Though it fits the story's narrative, it is bit unsettling, how the ML is trapping these people and forcing them to work endlessly without rest. Ghislain almost seem to be enjoying the misery of these overworked employees and is showing zero regard towards their well being. What is even more disturbing is that, he is pretty hypocritical. He pretends to care for all the employees and still uses various shrewd and unfair means to turn them into slaves so that he does not have to pay them. It is worsened by the fact that he NEVER even bothers appreciating or rewarding their hard work like giving them time off or some money, jewel, service or anything of the sort. Thats the only issue with this story!! I am hoping the protagonist to show some growth. Otherwise, he seems pretty much like a wannable tyrant.
Only updating is the problem, I really want more chapters coming in shorter time. Thx ?? ☺️
bro the immortals got some guts to fight with an immortal nation
so far I like the paving of the story and grimhilds personality,look forward to more chapters.
it is easy to read and understand and write do her /his best to entertain everyone