Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Historical fiction and Informative reality of WWII scenarios. Although the main characters are fictitious the essence of the story is historically adapted in the real WWII scenario during the time of Hitler's occupation of Europe. Likewise, the grim reality of the holocaust and the ordeal to death of the Jews in the concentration camps are horribly described and some scenarios such as the death of Rommel and Heydrich that really transpired in the past. The story, however injected the characters' depiction of their mission that are associated with daring escapade and the pursuit of the Gestapo on the train to Italy until they reach Albania.
This story is different from most others on the site, a really open and intriguing romance. Everything is beautifully placed and it's a very comforting read. Although the author can improve the language for less confusion in reading some parts. Overall, a beautiful book with a lot of potential!
Really good story line. The way you describe the sences is amazing, i can picture it. Every once in a while there are some spelling mistakes but overall its great. The length of each chapter is really good. cant wait to see what happens next!
This story was fun to read there was some bad grammar but other than that I liked it
Seems to be a very interesting story the summary makes the story look to be a great novel. I will read this story for sure. Keep the story coming.
Great job author-san! I have been reading and I just can't get enough I have a feeling it will turn darker and my my, what obsession do I have with darkness, This book is going straight to my reading list.
This is shaping up to be a very good novel, just need more chapters. I love this genre of novels especially, there is just not enough novels that combine sci-fi, magic, fantasy, and star travel.
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D fun her yh he is going to be free of charge it to the SIM cards and a bikini wax and I will be there at that should have been a bikini top of the phone and it k it k I go to bed so that should be fine I will
I like the way you feel when I say it was the only one I could fly in a detection program that was the water I was in a detection system that I saw
i love this shameless smut. i hope you can make this story from MC's POV instead of system's. mind control, brainwash, and common sense change is good! all hail smut!