I read 30 chapters waiting for something to happen and it never did
this had potential till you did one the worst things your could evee do 1. you made your mc evil thats just trash. all evil mc are just trash. 2. you forced corrupted and forced made the mc evil for litteraly no reason you made ut clear the ring would corrupt and twist the wearer yet the mc still chose the ring? why? thats stupid it would change who he is...the moment you amde this chkice this was no longer about an mc who went back in time to have a second chsnce at ljfe but a while new person that is just trash...
A very exiting and intriguing start! This novel has already gotten me hooked and looking forward to how the story progresses and new characters get introduced!!! Love your work
Hmmmm... this novel is good, Yup possibly even great based on the chapters available so far. It is not as fast pace and shallow as those other novels here are and it got its own style. Not "shallow" in a way that the chapters are somewhat meaty and in-depth. Also it does not follow the norm on how most CN novels are written (in this genre) like a straight line/linear. One has to read carefully as to understand what is happening. Enough said, I'll be following this novel and rooting for it. I'll invite everyone to read up a bit until the chapter when this review is written and see for yourself if it's up to your alley. ???????✌?
it's good. Not more to say other than god I wish I had that system haha, think about it never being scared of dying but instead seeking it hahah. And then again would he become even stronger when he dies of age? might even unlock some time power or something. I hope this get chosen and that more chapters are released faster.
System novels are my guilty pleasures, especially those that have master and disciple progression models. Really looking forward to this hopefully it gets picked. ?
The story was riveting except for the inconsistencies in the translation. Names were changing, different from the beginning of the story than to the last. There are also several gender errors and grammatical errors. Despite these mechanical errors, the story flowed seamlessly and the character build up was interesting. Good read but overly priced.
trash only good is translation quality..............................................................................................................................
man this novel is amazing I'll give it 10stars if it was allowed with the in-depth details that makes it even more amazing especially with it's high quality I just hope that the mc can find a way to heal his fractured mind and find a cure or possibly make one himself to fix his infertile junk cause it's just sad how he can't have his own children when he's in the 21st century where there's technology and stuff plus he's like a mad scientist so couldn't he possibly alter his genetics to make possibly to bear children or make another seal to seal that allows him to have children
Fml’s family disrespecting mc and the mc allowing it to happen. CHECKMc face slapping at fml class reunion and karaoke. CheckMc being up fml butt. CheckMc shows fml how capable his background is multiple times but she still doesn’ use his help. Check All the cliche that a Chinese novels has is in here but all stuffed into 40 chapters
it's a good read with daily updates and so far (chapter 116) characters are pretty well developed and the same can be said about the world background
This story have a unique background and skills. It's my first time seeing MC that have the ability to see luck. It's funny and have many misunderstandings. the females is deeply in love with the MC that it's almost yandere level.