Author, please stop rewriting the story and make it larger with more chapters it doesn't really matter about the rest. I know you may be saying its not good enough but trust me it is
I hv read this novel before but from the original author nd I plan to re write it since this author stopped updating four years ago
the story is great, It's just that the story doesn't say even once what type of monster the MC is or what he even looks like. but the story is still good
The MC hasn't made any idiotic mistakes, the plot flows smoothly, and the side characters are pretty interesting (especially the gamers). I think this story has potential. ?
Great quotes and idioms, but all in the wrong places. All words no substances. Synopsis is the section where author give an insight of the story, not to show off.
strongest sect of all times. pity webnovel gave up on it but- currently continued by another. ….....................…...................…..........
I love the plot ? the author is somewhat new to this but her work is good and nice to read ? that detailed explanation and mind game's is amazing ?
A well written story with well written characters.I was really hooked from the beginning. Talan had my heart immediately and so did samsara as a wee lil baby and then it made sense for him to be reborn.It reminded me of a fic I read years back that was the many faces of....someone Can't remember the name .I just know that many versions of the same person made different choices and stuff.Also, dad stealing purity was just...?
I enjoyed reading the first chapter and immediately decided to add this to my library. The writing quality and character description is really good. The same goes for world building. Fantasy and magic are not my cup of tea, but this is one book that has definitely held my attention. Good job, Tales_within_me !
Pancakeswitch got the best stories with great plots.... Here is another of her books. I'm so intrigued to read and join the adventure. A ghost with a system. sound interesting.
I recommend to you all, it'll be worth your time.
To be honest, this novel is not bad, but it is not good either, it kinda average.. From Ch1 until Ch370, the MC grow is quite slow ( F-rank to D-rank).. Then, from Ch400 until Ch470, MC grow suddenly becomes soooo fast (C-rank to SSS-rank)..
After that, MC grows become slow again.. MC is the only one have system, but everyone else can also grow their rank.. You might think SSS-rank is the highest, but it is not.. There Mortal grade (F-rank to D-rank), Special grade (C-rank to A-rank), Elite grade (S-rank to SSS-rank), Epic grade (SSS+-rank to SRR-rank), Planetary grade (RRR-rank to UR-rank), Legendary grade (EX-rank) and so on.. If you are someone like me who loves OP MC, you might be frustrated by the slowness of the MC grow..
Well, you need to wait until Ch.400 to see MC fast grow. I'm not sure if you are willing to read that far.. Well, even when MC is in lower rank/grade, he has higher skill rank (ex: when MC is E-rank, most his skill are C-rank or when MC is D-rank, his skill are B-rank).. But now, when MC rank got higher, his skill barely increase in rank (ex: when MC is S-rank, most his skill is STILL IN B-rank or when MC is in Planetary rank, most his skill is just A-rank).. MC skills barely grow as he gets stronger..
I'm definitely digging this so far! What funky dreams he's having. He'd better not ignore an angels advice, delusions or not! The writing is fantastic and clear. The world building is great.