it's a good read, quite simple to understand, the Mc of this story is likable, there are very few mistakes, the world background, however, I would give that a 4/5, overall the author did a good job here, keep up the good work.
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is this book dropped ?!????????and does this book have a raw version? is this boom a translation or an original story????????????????????????
I would recommend this book it is great. Once you start reading you cant stop. Its a real page turner. The auther has an amazing talent.
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An amazing story. The author has nicely displayed the world of VR in this story. Fight scenes are nicely portrayed. While the concept seems similar to other stories, the skills to write a good story must be noted. The development is well paced and I look forward to the updates. Nice work
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Slow start, but I feel it works better for the detailing of the world, as well as building the characters so far. I've always liked novels involving crafting or building based abilites, so this is perfect!
What to say god I fell in love with this novel, a pity that they do not give importance to translate, and webnovel values more silly novels than this type of entertaining works ???????????